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The Awakening

Sleepy stream thawing To new song of a warm spring Rebirth of all things

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/7/2010 12:17:00 PM

Congratulations Audrey, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann

John Freeman

Date: 3/4/2010 10:09:00 AM

A nice honor mentioned Audrey. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Marty Owens

Date: 3/4/2010 7:52:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku Audrey...Congratulations on your win...Marty

Linda Witt-King

Date: 3/3/2010 11:27:00 PM

Very nice Audrey. You saw the hope of spring in the photo. Congratulations on being mentioned in Raul's contest.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/3/2010 9:54:00 PM

So very nice Haiku! Dear Audrey! Congrats on your win! And thank you for your always kind comments on my poems and your friendship. Best wishes, Caroline.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/3/2010 5:36:00 PM

Congratulations Audrey on your placement with this fine poem and also thank you for your many kind and encouraging comments. I do appreciate them. god bless you!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/3/2010 12:42:00 PM

This is beautiful Audrey. It is the first time reading it as I was away. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Connie

James Fraser

Date: 3/3/2010 11:37:00 AM

Audrey, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/3/2010 9:06:00 AM

Lovely Haiku. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/3/2010 6:04:00 AM

Congrats to my BBF on your HM in Raul's contest.. a wonderful Haiku and win for u to so enjoy... so enjoy .. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2010 3:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Audrey. Love,Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/3/2010 1:49:00 AM

Audrey, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

James Ray Morris

Date: 2/28/2010 11:10:00 AM

Quite enjoyable, this awakening, Audrey. In a way it thaws something inside of me.....Jim

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/27/2010 4:04:00 PM

Well done on this one, beautifully said. REgards: Déirdre

Skat A

Date: 2/27/2010 2:38:00 PM

thanks for sharing this poem i enjoyed reading it I.T.

John Beam

Date: 2/26/2010 6:19:00 PM

thanks for congrats very nice haiku

Carey Sokolowski

Date: 2/26/2010 9:31:00 AM

hey u want to chat?

Marty Owens

Date: 2/25/2010 6:49:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Audrey...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/25/2010 4:44:00 PM

A rare "beauty" Audrey..thankxx for sharing and for your lovely comments on my poetry tonight... appreciate your input on the blog comment also... a wonderful Haiku ...luv.. Linda-Marie .. your BBF ...

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/25/2010 1:28:00 PM

Audrey, Reading your poetry this evening has been a wonderful way to relax and enjoy myself. Thank you for writing this awsome haiku. It is a refreshment in light of so much cold weather. The steam thawing...soon! (And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well.) Have a super rest of the day! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2010 6:34:00 AM

What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your beautiful Haiku poetry today Audrey. Love, Carol

David Byrne

Date: 2/24/2010 9:58:00 PM

Very nice!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/24/2010 2:09:00 PM

I can see the scene from your Haiku and I am looking forward to the time of enjoyable Spring weather. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. I appreciate you taking the time to do that. Sara

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 2/24/2010 1:57:00 PM

Audrey ~ wonderful Haiku good luck in the contest! Laura :0)

James Fraser

Date: 2/24/2010 1:37:00 PM

Kool title for you Haiku Audrey, good luck in the contest >> James