The Athiest

How human
is human nature?

Alas, then, is nature
by default     also human?

Human not soulfully enliven?

Just deposed products
of the same, natural
mystery?

So, is Nature or Man
to blame? -- is it devil
or God

or simply
the pollinated seed
perpetually alive in every 
duplicating spontaneous 
naturally manipulated oblivious 
spiritually vacant pod?

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Joe Maverick

Date: 8/6/2025 1:22:00 AM

Another point..While on this one Joe Dimino.' If eve-olution is true? Which it is.' In the sense Of Eve and Eden.' Yet the counterfiet one I mean.' If that were real.??? We men for instance Would all be 6ft one..Pefectly proportioned no ailments or very few and active up to 200 years As the 'evolutive filter would have ironed out somany faults by now' just my conclusions.'

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/7/2025 1:59:00 PM

If we are not all perfect human specimens, ravaged by disease and wars...it shows us exactly where humanity resides spiritually. Human consciousness is a reflection of spiritual development. We are willfully one. Know it or not. Why we must work together if to make any positive changes in the world's dire circumstances.

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/7/2025 1:05:00 PM

Hi Joe; more than one way can be true at the same time, while seeming diametrically opposed. For instance, for Man Dimension (entirely physical~ falsely imagined) there is up, down, etc.. For Pure God Dimension, direction, substance can exist, function entirely opposite, yet correct, and together at the same time in harmony...and everywhere. Including nowhere. Creation, the fall is man's dense physical descent from the God-head. Adam and Eve are true....while evolution is true. While there are aliens, lifeforms throughout the universe, that are presently beyond most human comprehension. None of these truths, makes humanity any closer nor more distant from a personal, intelligent relationship with God. When Christ left he said, he had many other flocks. Not enough room here to even begin to explore the infinite not so obvious truths. The things I touch upon, in this paragraph, are all true, yet seeming impossible to reconcile together in any serious way.

Rowena Velasco

Date: 8/3/2025 8:37:00 PM

Really interesting take, Joe. I like how you raise those big questions without trying to pin down one answer. That last part about the “vacant pod” really sticks—kinda eerie but thought-provoking. Nice work!

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/4/2025 4:23:00 AM

Thank you, Rowena. Well, vacant, if one believes that spirit matters greatly -- If one does not believe in spirit, like soul, then instinct or intellect can fill the void...though to me, that seems rather robotic or programed as opposed to alive with Free Will. Which is another pet topic of mine...if we have Free Will, true Free Will, then we must be in control of every possible variable -- like, creating our own bodies and the earth they inhabit. I do believe we are partners with God in all of these functions -- and believing this way does not cause a smidgen of conflict with my core Christian values. They remain very compatible. Just my opinion. I am no expert on anything. No degree in such matters.

Valsa George

Date: 8/3/2025 5:49:00 AM

Hi Joe, this is too deep for me. This goes over my head. How I wish if you had made it a little simpler.

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/3/2025 7:05:00 AM

Hi Valsa; thank you for commenting. Well, to be enigmatic or incomprehensible was not my intention. Maybe this work needs more polishing, or to be discarded all together? I will give it more thought.

Bill Baker

Date: 7/31/2025 6:46:00 PM

A bit confusing to me, Joe, but I guess not to an atheist. We write what we think about, it's meant to be heard by others, we just don't always know who. Blessings my friend, Bill

Joe Dimino
Date: 7/31/2025 8:02:00 PM

Very true; this work is probably of interest to few. Just felt it was something worth saying. Thank you, Bill. Have a great evening!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2025 12:43:00 PM

gosh, so deep, joe. I guess I am not the philosophical type!

Joe Dimino
Date: 7/31/2025 1:20:00 PM

Hi Andrea; thank you for reading and considering this work. Who knows? Just some thoughts that popped into my head. Happy I am not judge and jury, for anyone but myself. Have a great writing day my friend!

Tom Woody

Date: 7/31/2025 9:56:00 AM

I genuinely feel sorry for some of the atheists. Religion done them wrong in many cases. The true God never disappoints

Joe Dimino
Date: 7/31/2025 11:19:00 AM

He has never disappointed me...I cannot say that I have not been a disappointment to him. I keep trying to do better. Thank you, Tom; blessings my friend.

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 7/31/2025 9:16:00 AM

Well said. Thanks for sharing1

Joe Dimino
Date: 7/31/2025 9:34:00 AM

Hi Benjamin -- just thinking, and gushing it out. I have my own personal observations, as I am certain does everyone else. Thank you for commenting.