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The Atheist Premiere Contest Winner

He pipes out in pride and boasts of his creed crushing the spirit of those who believe he thinks he is right he has planted no seed except that of money and power, perceived The stars and the moon are trinkets of science no angels of cure no God to procure he lifts up his chin and puffs in defiance honey there's nothing out there, but manure; The sun and the wind the rain and the trees nothing out there can foretell,... its so lame abhorring the faithful that fall on their knees, he's a rift in God's nature, Oh ! what a shame That he can't see the beauty of "Faithing in Christ" and he can't feel the power, of Faith, thinly sliced. November 29, 2018

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Date: 12/7/2018 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations Pixie and what a bold and true first line "He pipes out in pride and boasts of his creed." What an excellent way to start. Very nice.
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Date: 12/7/2018 11:36:00 AM
Great write Pixie, congratulations...
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Date: 12/7/2018 11:15:00 AM
Congrats on your 1st Pixie-- I especially liked the last line,'...thinly sliced'
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Date: 12/7/2018 7:55:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Pixie! Excellent write!
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Date: 12/7/2018 12:07:00 AM
God be praised and thanked for your poem; and for you for declaring such theistic truth. Congrats. God bless you.
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Date: 12/6/2018 10:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win PD..
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Date: 12/6/2018 7:14:00 PM
Wow, Pixie. Beautifully penned. Congrats son your gold medal win.
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Date: 12/6/2018 6:35:00 PM
Pixie, your wonderful Sonnet gave me goosebumps! An amazing write, and very powerful in supporting the belief in God that most humans feel. My heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win, and I am faving your poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/5/2018 10:20:00 AM
Pixie, excellent write for the contest, well done and best of luck~
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Date: 12/4/2018 11:32:00 AM
Your poem is written as though challenging the prejudice of atheists. But in assuming, what you have no right to assume about a group, you have ended up merely being prejudiced yourself.
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Date: 12/4/2018 11:30:00 AM
I take no pleasure from saying this, but what you have Written is a gross generalization. 'atheist' only entails a disbelief in god. Beyond that an atheist could be any kind of person. We are spiritual and non-spiritual, kind and cruel, arrogant and modest etc.
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Date: 12/2/2018 2:06:00 PM
Thank you Jesus for opening my heart and mind to your glory! I've never understood how the atheist could show so much hatred towards something they don't believe is there.... Crazy!
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Date: 12/2/2018 12:59:00 PM
The Puritans of old distinguished between two kinds of atheist. There were theoretical atheists, who had 'sinned away their reason', but these were a small minority. The great majority of them were those to whom the psalmist referred in the line 'The fool has said in his heart there is no God.' Such atheists may go to church, mosque or synagogue for appearance's sake but they lead lives that deny the relevance of religious demands. When atheists act nobly, as some do, they are serving God too.
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Date: 12/2/2018 12:59:00 AM
I believe in dreams, poetry, tolerance, freedom, synchronicity and a spiritual Universe. And respect of others. Each to their own, but let us all a vision of Peace. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 12/1/2018 7:56:00 AM
Don't atheists see faith in others? I'm agnostic, but I like to see people following their gods, keeps the options open.
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Date: 11/29/2018 9:02:00 PM
Your exceptional poem shines with your artistry and skill, Pixie. Beautifully expressed, my friend. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/29/2018 12:02:00 PM
Nicely done my friend.
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Date: 11/29/2018 9:55:00 AM
Excellent poem.
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Date: 11/29/2018 7:27:00 AM
Atheists are souls of sorrow. They worship nothing of real value...mock those who have found peace in their beliefs. How can they live that way? Very fine poem that touches the intellect as well as the heart.
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Date: 11/29/2018 6:39:00 AM
On mark my friend..you have the portrait of an atheist well painted. So many attributes of a non-believer.. in words of someone who cherishes faith and God. I know this poem stems from your heart. A win for you, Pixie.
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