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*Image of Break-Fast by PIN. The Art of Peace it is butter on the toast and sugar in the tea ... that brands the dawn 2022 July 10 *11th Place* THE ART OF PEACE ~~John lawless: Judged 2022 July 15 HMS; 17 syllables.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/20/2022 12:19:00 PM

William, peace is indeed the sweet harmony "butter on toast" and "sugar in the tea." What perfect combinations to express the essence of peace! Blessings! Mahalo!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/20/2022 2:15:00 PM

And mahalo too, Sam, thought I'd chime in a "balanced breakfast" from the singed and bland -- that's farther from my good friend, Aloha~William

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/18/2022 9:59:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/20/2022 2:03:00 PM

Thank you, Beata, for your shining smile brings forth adorning words that linger beautifully my friend, Aloha~William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2022 7:20:00 PM

lovely image, my friend. Congrats on your win

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/15/2022 7:27:00 PM

My chimer alert has an attitude, Andrea, sweet prompts workin' my friend, Aloha~William

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/15/2022 9:01:00 AM

Glad to see this scrumptious treat on the winners list, congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/15/2022 9:04:00 AM

It's coffee and leftover apple pie dawn for me, Michelle, --sweet my friend, Aloha~William

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/15/2022 8:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning write. Have a good weekend:-) Alexis

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/15/2022 10:06:00 AM

Oy vey! Ay caramba! Pardonne moi! ALEXIS! My bad—retirees are on permanent vacation with their minds locked away in a hotel closet—THANKS my friend, Aloha~William

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/15/2022 9:01:00 AM

Thanks aplenty, Christuraj, blessings truly my friend, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/15/2022 8:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write/picture. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/15/2022 9:00:00 AM

Thank you, Paula, blessings truly my friend, Aloha~William

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/12/2022 5:35:00 AM

A decadent write, for sure. :) Nice one! Linda

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/12/2022 8:09:00 AM

Thank you, Linda, there's beauty and taste in underlying principles that transcend my friend, Aloha~William

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/10/2022 3:55:00 PM

Warm toast with better melting, fragrant tea with pearls of sweetness - this is all so comforting, bringing forth a peaceful morning~

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/10/2022 4:27:00 PM

Ah, Michelle, the rich and creamy atop singed baked goods, and candied gooeyness delights the insipid, hails pleasantries to inspire the banal my friend, Aloha~William