The Albatross

To be like the Albatross Most of the day on high currents gliding Circling wind systems lifted flying

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James Fraser

Date: 10/28/2009 2:47:00 PM

Awesome sea birds Sara >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/28/2009 5:49:00 AM

Very lovely image, Sara. It would be fund to spend a day "circling wind systems" high above the seas. Wonderful poem! Love, Carolyn

Pamela Griffiths

Date: 10/27/2009 7:05:00 PM

I used to play the guitar and played the song 'Albatross' very soothing. Nice poem. Pam.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/27/2009 5:12:00 PM

It would be lovely to feel free like an Albatross, cruising the air... Keep writing and thank you for your comments...Gert

John Freeman

Date: 10/27/2009 5:09:00 PM

Sounds free as the breeze, Sara! I've had wonderful dreams where I would sore around in the air for what seem like hours, free as the Albatross in your poem. Wonderful freedom in the spirit feeling. Thanks so much for sharing, this awesome, write. Sincerely, Moses

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/27/2009 2:31:00 PM

Reminds me of "The Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner" by Samuel Taylor Coleridge. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

P Sheart

Date: 10/27/2009 11:58:00 AM

I love this! A beautiful vision dear Sara! I feel like I'm flying too, smile. Keep writing! Later Love Light Truth Patricia

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/27/2009 11:49:00 AM

I would love to have the wind under me and in my hair.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/27/2009 10:46:00 AM

Beautiful and descriptive free verse... u could almost see the albatross overhead... thankxxx for your encouraging comments on my recent posts... U are amazing and supportive always... Linda-Marie