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The Abandoned Orphan

He was an abandoned innocent tot sent to an orphanage where havoc reigned each night he shivered in his tiny cot numb but brave he cried only when it rained unspoken fears that never were laid to rest sat deep in his chest, each day he would pray "please don't let them hurt me" he did his best but somehow, he always got in their way food was scarce so he hid each tiny crumb inside the folds of an old brown teddy at night he lay there disheartened and glum "maybe someone will need a boy like me" a lonely child a flashback without blot, he was an abandoned innocent tot. Date: May 14, 2022 Sponsor Emile Pinet Contest Name Orphan Sonnet

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Date: 5/28/2022 1:01:00 PM
This is a beautiful sonnet! Very touching! I have a soft spot for orphaned children! Wish I could do more for them!
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Date: 5/17/2022 7:52:00 PM
You are pulling at the heart strings here, Vie, a stark reminder, all this is real. Love your Sonnet.. Harry
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Date: 5/17/2022 1:15:00 PM
WoW! Mystic, You penned such a well-written heart-tugging write. My heart went out to the little orphan boy. This is had a “real” feeling to it. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/16/2022 3:24:00 PM
Perhaps there's an Oliver Twist in the story.
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Date: 5/15/2022 12:32:00 PM
Consider how many orphans Putin has created! Then we have the Attorney General of Arkansas forcing women to bear children, and claiming, "We will take care of them" except there is no baby formula available at present, but things will be better when that child becomes a taxpayer! Orphans never forget! Aloha!
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Date: 5/16/2022 2:52:00 PM
Orphans spend a life time feeling misplaced and misunderstood, and no they never forget, Rico, they deserve so much more then what they have been given from start.
Date: 5/15/2022 4:38:00 AM
So much suffering in this world, but when a child suffers it blots humanity. Well depicted emotive write, Vienna.
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Date: 5/15/2022 9:19:00 AM
Yes Vijay, many suffer in silence, but deep inside they hurt, we need to pray for our children every day, Thanks for the kind visit, :)
Date: 5/15/2022 2:45:00 AM
Many can relate -- even if not orphans. You write evocatively, Rose
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Date: 5/15/2022 3:17:00 AM
Yes Anil, many can relate to this, many grow up becoming such empathetic humans because of their experience, some are scarred for life.
Date: 5/14/2022 10:45:00 PM
The echo of Sir I need some more.
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Date: 5/15/2022 3:16:00 AM
it is sad how so many children go hungry, and are abused, its all too real, in many families

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