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The Whales Plead

You hunted me in the sea You knew just where I would be I would come up for air With harpoons you were right there. You slaughtered ones like me In every ocean , every sea not caring if young or old Only the tales of being bold You would chase me for miles Shooting harpoons all the while In most cases it was for fun You did not care, I was on the run You threw out your nets and floats Knowing full well that they could choke It could take me way down So I could not breathe and drown You would hang ones like me On your boats for all to see You did not care that I could see My kind hanging before me You hunted us , we are just a few So little of us left, if you only knew Extinction crept up so fast Banning has got to last Our numbers have so declined Your race cannot be so blind We once roamed the oceans and sea now please just let us whales be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/9/2010 4:21:00 PM
interesting write,, nice one,, enjoyed...p.d.
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Date: 6/6/2010 7:01:00 AM
A whale of a tale that harpoons the heart of mankind. It sickens me - the cruelty of our kind that kills simply for ego purposes. I pray that humans wake-up before it is to late. Great writing, Phyllis. Love, Lainie
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:54:00 PM
Great job, and congratulations on your win! Luv, andrea
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Date: 6/4/2010 9:23:00 AM
Wonderful poem Phyllis, many congratulations on your win in Amy's fine contest >> James
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Date: 6/3/2010 2:45:00 PM
This was a beauty of a poem and it really, REALLY pissed me off. Excellent job. Phenomenal. Like the 1st (whale) point of view. Congrats. (when i say it pissed me off, that is a good thing- LOL)
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Date: 6/3/2010 2:15:00 PM
Congrats Phyllis on your winning poem in Amy's contest .. the whales have won a place on the docket and rightly so through your words my friend... enjoy a sweet victory dance .. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 5/26/2010 12:34:00 PM
Hey there nice tribute to the whales! The Adam's are beating the Eve's to the finish line and we need you gal! Please write a poem as Eve in Eden and submit it to my contest! You can pretend to be the "wife" of one of the Adams in Linda's contest! Hope to hear from you soon!
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Date: 5/25/2010 7:20:00 PM
Very nice and interesting entry for the contest. Good luck
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Date: 5/25/2010 4:11:00 PM
A wonderful tribute poem to the Whale ..a lovely mammal of God's creation.. so much loss due to hunters and now the oil mess.. good luck in Amy's contest with this great poem .. my entry is "Snow Leopard Laments" and it was fun doing the research and learniing in the process...about their plight... luv.. Linda-Marie... new blog on desserts and yummy treats for future Soup ideas..luv..
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Date: 5/25/2010 4:08:00 PM
Great choice of an endangered animal for the competition, Phyllis. Whales are so intriguing and seem to have great intelligence. I would hate to see their species fall to extinction. Very well done! Love, Carolyn
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