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The Bird

There is a bird inside your heart that's singing to the moon all melodies of lives around you friends around you and all you cherish Just listen to the bird when it does not whistle but sings a melody or talks or whispers desperately sad songs in your ears

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Date: 2/26/2016 4:29:00 PM
Voahanitriniaina, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/5/2016 12:33:00 AM
well done
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Date: 2/1/2014 9:38:00 PM
I love this - a bird inside my heart. This is very sweet. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 11/8/2013 1:13:00 PM
Good morning Hanitra, just a note to say you are on my mind.
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Date: 10/28/2013 10:04:00 AM
Hannitra!! Missing in action! I like your poetry. Thanks for sharing. Friend.JM
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Date: 10/27/2013 1:28:00 PM
lovely write, my friend
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Date: 10/25/2013 1:09:00 PM
a lovely melody indeed....nicely penned Hanitra....thanks for your kind comments on my poems...best wishes
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/25/2013 2:43:00 PM
My pleasure, dear Joseph! Have a nice weekend! Blessings, Hanitra
Date: 10/23/2013 9:16:00 AM
Sometimes it sings sad songs that I can't get out of my head. It appears I had missed a number of your poems, I am so glad I stopped by today to read them. Have a most excellent day Hanitra. Blessings and hugs to you.
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/25/2013 12:19:00 PM
Many thanks, dear Rick! Don't worry, I know you are very busy with your poetry and I'm very happy for that! Keep on writing so creatively, especially in collabs; your communicative skills are so unique, we have to use them! Love, Hanitra
Date: 10/23/2013 7:11:00 AM
- So sweet and lovely poem !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/25/2013 12:22:00 PM
Thanks so much for your visit, dear Anne Lise! Love, Hanitra
Date: 10/22/2013 1:00:00 PM
A lovely, poignant poem, Hanitra! I enjoyed reading and thank you so much for your kind comments today! Love and blessings, Rrhonda
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Date: 10/22/2013 12:46:00 PM
Lovely poem...Yes...the bird sings beautifully...If only we will listen...Lovely poem. Thank you, my dear, for you lovely comments. You are sweet and kind...I've answered you post on my latest...Have a look...hugs!!!
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Date: 10/13/2013 7:41:00 AM
this poem is perfect in its simplicity and truth. Loved it.
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Date: 10/12/2013 4:11:00 PM
this one is very wistful. I rather like it!!
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Date: 10/12/2013 12:52:00 PM
hanitra, I think there is a bird hidden within each of us and all too often we do not hear the right notes,this is a just reminder... very well written....David
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