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For Ink Empress' That was Then, This is Now poetry contest.

 

I once saw a man with kaleidoscopic eyes, reflecting in hues of periwinkle and persimmon. His heart illuminated in shades of scarlet, marigold and clementine, releasing rainbow ink from his psychedelic pen, brushing over his personal poetic sins. Free from regret and pain. He sat upon his throne as the king of swing. Gazing at the golden orb dance in a new dawn, he reminded himself - that was then, this is now. I once saw a woman who sang songs of the siren. About pain and how that was then and this is now. Her soft sophisticated sojourner soul, soaked silent sobs from soliloquy spirits. But, she was lost in a spring that sprung sorrows, waiting for the return of birds and their sweet chorus, so their orchestra could fill her heart's empty nest. When a dove with broken wings laid eggs, she began sewing shadows to heal their wounds. In the magic of the moment, she realized every bird has its nest. I once saw a child crying for the children of tomorrow, hurt from trials and tribulations, twirling like a typhoon. He began weaving webs of gloom, portraying wilted fields on his canvas. I guided him to the man who bled in rainbow ink, so he could express, rather than suppress, as no one should be living a life of fear. Told him, that was then, this is now. A versifier was born rewriting with palm leaves, narrating the truth beyond his eyes. I once saw a man of God, who always dipped his fingers in rosemary, before he raised his hands in prayer. I spoke to him about the universe, told him my sorrows and asked: "What if stars were gold, would the queen in the sky be jealous?" "How can we tell between evolution and spiritual intervention?" "What is the meaning of life?" He simply smiled. told me: "Worry ends when faith begins. God has a plan for you. What happened yesterday has gone, that was then, this is now. Go find your path" I remember the day I heard your voice, and you wrote in my beloved's diary, "I am love." Idolising your intricate infatuation, I entered the labyrinth of your twisted mentality, removing merciless moonflowers from your precious petal garden. soothing like sun drops on carnation seedlings, we swam like dolphins in a timeless reef, as faith and hope were restored, dark days and lonely nights were gone, because that was then, this is now, as now my heart lies in your soul. Yet, still I worry you may forget me. We all have a destination, sometimes we find the right path, sometimes we remain waiting. We can't always control fate, but we can act upon the pangs of our heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 4/18/2024 6:57:00 AM
"Worry ends where faith begins." So powerful. I flowed through every word, so deep. And that's what we do as poets, we see, we feel and our words are sometimes a cry from strangers sang to us in dreams, imaginations, in different realms and we birth those words to life. "brushing over his personal poetic sins." Found humour in this as much as I saw it's deep thoughts. We need to totally leave "then" to make it "now." But it's not always an easy choice. We spend the rest of our life deciding.
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Date: 4/13/2024 11:23:00 PM
Shhh ~ silence please, as I save this as a fav
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Date: 4/13/2024 10:47:00 PM
How deep are your thoughts on every subject, dear friend ! Simply superb! Without saying, this poem is so beautifully done, juxtaposing a bygone past and the pleasant accomplishments of the present. The man , woman and child represent every man battling between a past and the present."Worry ends when faith begins. God has a plan for you. What happened yesterday has gone, that was then, this is now. Go find your path" . I can say with conviction and from my own experience that this man of God is absolutely right. So forget about your worries and thank God for the gift of creating whirlwinds of joy and surging emotions in the mind of your readers through your amazing gift of poetry! Into my FAVE
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Date: 4/13/2024 9:29:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem and the beautiful music, a great deal, Silent One. Your writing is superb! Nest wishes for a win. :)
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Date: 4/13/2024 5:09:00 PM
brillant .and reassuring message, God can be an answer or not, but the questionning means a lot, thanks for the touching and beautiful poem
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Date: 4/13/2024 3:54:00 PM
Coincidence, I was just filling in 22 across in the crossword puzzle L.A.'s Daily News! look it up Saturday 4.13.24. I'm playing the song, I remember it, used to love that song in the 70's damn uplifting! I like this rendition now, playing it as the missiles fall on the Holy Land! "Worry ends when faith begins. God has a plan for you. What happened yesterday has gone, that was then, this is now" we should heed these words, Silent One. God bless the tormented and the tormentor~Anaya
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Date: 4/13/2024 1:29:00 PM
Superbly interwoven with anecdotes that provide light on your central argument, SO. Your lengthy description clearly shows how much work you put into conveying the then vs. present. The final chapter that matters—There is a place we're all heading, and while sometimes we discover the way, other times we just have to wait. Fantastic poetry with such contrasting ideas and a captivating manner. BOL for the contest,
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Date: 4/13/2024 9:02:00 AM
Wonderfully woven in stories that enlighten the essence of your theme, SO. Much effort you devoted in this long depiction to convey the then vs. now. Meaningful ending---We all have a destination, sometimes we find the right path, sometimes we remain waiting---
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Date: 4/13/2024 7:50:00 AM
Wonderful poem with such contrasts and style of writing. I am sure this will place high if it is for the contest.
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Date: 4/13/2024 6:07:00 AM
such an engaging poem, Silent One. I appreciate the detail in the "I once saw" verses....each one captivating in its own way. Your poem shows your compassionate heart and poetic spirit, the one that I envision sees life as poetry. Beautifully done. Best wishes with the contest, enjoy your day, Sara
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