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That Life I Knew- Poem Using Titles

That Life I Knew *Only in a different life, I got to go *one Christmas Eve with friends round neighborhoods. How magical to stroll in falling snow well bundled as we carried warm baked goods. From house to house, we trekked, so we might bring good will and sing with gusto on that night our carols celebrating Christ, *the King. What wondrous time, when families reunite! Merry Christmas and a *Happy New Year we said in parting; then went on our way, but once at home, I joined with those most dear. “This joy is precious,” *I heard Mother say. Oh, vanished youth! My mother’s words ring true. In Heaven may that life I knew – renew! A rhyming poem in sonnet form using the titles of my first five poems posted at PoetrySoup. ONLY IN A DIFFERENT LIFE/ THIS CHRISTMAS EVE/THE KING/ HAPPY NEW YEAR/ I HEARD MOTHER (Obviously, I had to go with Christmas theme: Thanks, Pendleton!)

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Date: 9/27/2015 11:07:00 AM
What could be more wonderful than the old home at Christmas time. Like this one that I missed. Love, daver
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Date: 9/21/2015 9:21:00 PM
Beautifully done Andrea. I've been waiting for this one. Well worth it.
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Date: 9/21/2015 3:48:00 PM
Such a beautiful way your used your titles to create your lovely Sonnet, Andrea. One would never know you were fitting in titles from previously poems -- it reads so smoothly with a wonderful message. All the best for the contest! Sandra
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Date: 9/17/2015 2:10:00 AM
You seamlessly fit in your titles Andrea. This is a wonderful early Christmas gift! 7
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Date: 9/15/2015 9:39:00 PM
A sonnet masterpiece and executed with titles from your previous poems! Very creative and surely not an easy task to pull of so very well. You know I have soft spot(love!) for sonnets and this one sings to me... A7
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Date: 9/15/2015 8:10:00 PM
Golly gosh Andrea... you just keep excelling with your sonnets. The knitting of the titles and the flow is brilliant - Lindsay
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Date: 9/15/2015 3:01:00 PM
now i do feel that christmas mood, andie... haven't done any for this challenge yet; my titles are so long!..what a fine sonnet!.. huggs
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Date: 9/15/2015 2:08:00 PM
You have mastered a challenging task Andrea heartwarming write. Loved it.
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Date: 9/15/2015 1:17:00 PM
Wow, I love this, did you have to put them in order. Seems to me that this would be a most difficult thing to do, you excel in challenges.
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Date: 9/15/2015 1:07:00 PM
Very nicely done. Its not an easy task, and I love your images. Christmas Is BBQ and shorts weather here
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Date: 9/15/2015 9:39:00 AM
I have been trying (unsuccessfully) to figure out a way to use my first 5 poem titles in a poem. You did this masterfully! It is definitely not an easy thing to do!!
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Date: 9/15/2015 7:58:00 AM
WELL DONE.....ANDREA. Not an easy task, this five title torture of Pendleton. A smoothly woven sonnet.
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Date: 9/15/2015 7:46:00 AM
Well used titles Andrea, it seems Christmas has come early.
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Date: 9/14/2015 9:12:00 PM
So creative & lovely
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Date: 9/14/2015 4:55:00 PM
A well and a beautiful write Andrea.... I love you constructed it. Excellent........A.M.
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Date: 9/14/2015 4:14:00 PM
Sonnet queen strikes again - good luck in the contest:-) My titles are so obscure no way could I enter this contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/14/2015 3:56:00 PM
I like it Andrea...I have to check out this contest...wonder what my first 6 were...I know the first two but not after that.
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