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Thank You Mr. S.

I wanted to be a writer When I was just a young teen But I was so incredibly shy And kids can be so mean. Then a new teacher came along. He had such a different view. I no longer felt embarrassed By the writing that I'd do. He made me feel I had a gift And that it should be shared. To him I admitted my hopes And I felt that he really cared. Mr. Sowden encouraged extra work, To write about whatever we wanted. So I wrote and wrote and wrote some more. The words just flew, undaunted. My grade ten English teacher Read my work out loud And winked when the class applauded, For the first time I felt proud. I never signed my real name. The class didn't know it was me But my work garnered admiration, On display for all to see. That was the year I learned that What I wrote was pretty good. I just needed time for confidence to grow And that, Mr. Sowden, understood. He made us see the written word In a way that made us aware. So I would like to thank him, The English teacher who really did care.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/11/2011 10:07:00 PM
Exceptional! From your pervasive descriptiveness and rhyming here, it looks as if you owe a lot to your teacher. It appears he did a good job at teaching.
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Date: 12/10/2010 7:29:00 PM
wow, Francine, I am glad I came to see the winners of this contest so that I could read about your Mr. Sowden. I sure hope there have been at least a few of my students that have felt more pride and confidence because of something I inspired in them as well. LUv, Andrea ps congratulations on this great piece!
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Date: 12/7/2010 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Francine in Jared Pickett's "The Ode" contest. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/5/2010 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Jared, Francine
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Date: 12/5/2010 4:56:00 AM
Congrats Francine on your HM in Jared's contest with this magnificent entry on your special muse.. enjoy this honor today with luv my friend.. an emotional piece..luv..
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Date: 11/18/2010 10:55:00 AM
Sometimes it takes someone new to see what our strengths are Francine, wonderful story from your past >> James :)
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Date: 11/16/2010 8:26:00 AM
Such a sweet write and tribute to that one person that changed your life and encouraged u to take the plunge into the writing world and now we get to share the fruits of your labor Francine.. a marvelous creative piece .. have a happy day and be blessed with luv..
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Date: 11/15/2010 11:30:00 PM
I could identify with your lines "I never signed my real name. The class didn't know it was me". Written so well.... cheers suresh
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Date: 11/15/2010 9:25:00 PM
Well written sweet little babe... i could relate to teachers well... but i went a droving with a thousand head of cattle ...so i never really learned english..too well thank you for your support ....Don
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