Premiere Contest WinnerThank You

Thank you “And if the sun refused to shine” Music finds my sleep and calls from a bedside table, slits of light through the slatted blinds create mini horizons on the wall Time has caught me once again as Led Zeppelin reminds me “I would still be loving you” For the morning throws me back to reality, the longing in my heart which faded beneath the moon has returned to view this bed of only one figure, reaching out for what was “When mountains crumble to the sea” Finding the rocky coastline depicts the feeling in my heart, as I stumble Tear filled eyes a constant, empty arms waving freely in the air to the haunting rhythm of a plastic clock radio “There will still be you and me” If only music were truth, and truth was a melody, easily sung regardless of tempo or flow Key changes finding a bridge of lonely footprints that take me to your memory, remembering the good, remembering the days, and forcing a smile, for each day I whisper “Thank you” The italicized lines are from the Led Zeppelin song “Thank You” which inspired this piece 11/14/16 For “The Poet’s Ear” poetry contest Sponsored by: Greg Barden
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Walker Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 3:10 PM
A definite winner. First place is well deserved !! Congratulations :)
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August 18, 2017 at 6:30 PM
Thank you so very much Lenna.
Wade Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 11:20 PM
Although not familiar of the song, the poem is lovely. You inspire me.
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August 8, 2017 at 11:00 AM
Thank you Vivien.
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August 2, 2017 at 3:05 PM
I am also pleased to see that you won the Trophy. i am very proud of you my friend. Hugs and Love. Have a great day my friend.
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August 2, 2017 at 3:19 PM
Thank you Darlene for saying such nice things to me. I appreciate you my friend.
White Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 3:47 AM
I am so happy you won this Trophy my dear friend. If anyone deserved this, it is you!
Green Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 6:47 PM
Thanks, it's like my parting gift. :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 10:03 PM
So well written Chris. No wonder it is a top winner. Congratulations my friend! : )
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July 31, 2017 at 6:47 PM
Thank you so very much Connie.
Ashley Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 8:23 PM
Hi Chris, back again, to read this beautiful poem once more and to congratulate you on your top win! :)
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July 31, 2017 at 6:47 PM
Thanks again Susan for all of your kindness.
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July 30, 2017 at 2:34 PM
This is a well-thought-out one. Congrats on your top placement, Chris!
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July 31, 2017 at 6:46 PM
Thank you Moon Flower. I am happy you liked it.
Hamilton Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 12:32 PM
Hey Chris congrats on a great win, well done!
Green Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 6:46 PM
Thanks so much John.
Nusker Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 9:34 AM
Congrats on your fine win with this magnolious poem. Really outstanding.
Green Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 6:46 PM
Thank you so much.
Cozart Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 7:56 AM
Congrats on you win, Chris!
Green Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 6:46 PM
Thanks Dale.
Barden Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 12:46 AM
This was exquisitely written with extraordinary imagination and sublime phrasing ... this knocked me over the first time I read it, and it improved with every reading - adore this work! Congrats on FIRST PLACE, Chris!
Green Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 6:46 PM
Thanks so much Greg. I am happy you liked this poem enough to award it first place. I am humbled to have won your contest.
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July 28, 2017 at 1:03 PM
Gorgeous poem my friend. That song always gives me goosebumps. Have you heard it by Tory Amos? Toe curlingly good :) Hope you are well dear poet xomo!
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July 28, 2017 at 3:06 PM
Thank you Maureen.
Ashley Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 10:15 PM
Hi Chris, Led Zeppelin songs bring back memories and makes your poem poignant and priceless. Thank you for this beautiful write :)
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July 28, 2017 at 3:06 PM
Thank you Susan.
Daniel Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 6:01 AM
Great inspiration for a lovely poem, Chris:) hope you're doing good, missing you:(
Green Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 5:29 PM
Thanks Jo, I missing you as well. Have fun my friend.
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July 20, 2017 at 5:02 AM
Beautiful poem Chris, I love the Led Zepplin lines in between ...Maria
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July 21, 2017 at 5:28 PM
Thank you so very much Maria.
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July 19, 2017 at 8:19 AM
So very heartfelt and inspiring. And I like the Led Zepplin :) Beautiful... hugs :)
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July 19, 2017 at 12:52 PM
Thanks so very much Kina for always bringing a smile to me.
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July 19, 2017 at 7:48 AM
Love the song. I love that entire album. I like how you broke it down between stanzas. Now I'm going to California:) Brilliant write, Chris.
Green Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 12:52 PM
Thanks so much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
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July 18, 2017 at 4:48 PM
Hi Chris, The "song" inspired you to write a good poem. Thanks for writing such a write:-) Alexis
Green Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 5:27 PM
Thanks you so very much my friend.
Thinker Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 3:26 PM
Beautiful inspiration Chris. I felt each word.
Green Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 4:28 PM
Thanks so very much. I appreciate your kind thoughts
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 1:29 PM
One of my favorites from them...you have me riding in my 95 mustang convertible tunes cranked to the max...love how you did this Chris
Green Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 2:30 PM
Thanks so much Tim, yep, one of my favorites too.
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July 18, 2017 at 1:10 PM
I have read this poem and enjoyedit. Well done Peace and love.
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July 18, 2017 at 2:29 PM
Thank you so very much Darlene
Sands Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 12:31 PM
Now this beauty Chris, I think many can relate to , as can I. A great entry for the contest! I hope it does well :)
Green Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 2:29 PM
Thank you so very much Heidi for all of your kindness.
White Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 11:57 AM
Beautiful poem my friend, the Led Zeppelin lines in between are incredibly well woven into your poem. A beautiful memory, and I wish you good luck in the contest.
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July 18, 2017 at 2:29 PM
Thanks so very much Darren, I am happy you liked it.
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