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Tethered To a Moment

After all the long months waiting and planning, the day had arrived for you to meet me. It was a bright sunny day with a breeze in the air, a day filled with excitement was everywhere. Joy filled my heart and soul, I just could not wait a minute longer. The moment I first met you, it was amazing to see you face to face. Your little fingers and toes all in a row, a huge smile looking back at me. I now had someone very special, someone to call me mommy. Date Written: 8/22/2021 Tethered To A Moment This or That, Vol 6 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 9/9/2021 7:48:00 PM

My goodness, I wrote a poem with the same kind of feeling for my daughter, now 20 years old. When I first laid eyes on her she smiled at me. I've read your poem 3 times and each time it brings little happy tears. The love for your child is like no other kind of love, only mothers understand that. It's powerful, different and so special.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/10/2021 8:00:00 AM

Thank You, for reading this 3 times and for writing. Your note made my day. Did you know, you can fav a poem???? Glad you love this write. Yes, only mothers understand this love is very different. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/23/2021 9:11:00 AM

This was lovely Paula...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2021 1:29:00 PM

Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you love this write. Have a blessed day.................

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/22/2021 8:07:00 PM

In this poetry, I could feel your excitement, faith, and delight! My best wishes for a win, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2021 8:01:00 AM

Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your best wishes. Glad you like this one and could feel my feelings. Have a blessed day.................

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 8/22/2021 5:37:00 PM

I could just feel your anticipation, hope, and joy in this poem! What a beautiful moment to write about. You express these feelings very well, Paula. Good luck in the contest!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2021 7:59:00 AM

Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this write and could feel what I was feeling. Have a blessed day.................

Pam Deremer

Date: 8/22/2021 1:12:00 PM

Thank you for sharing.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2021 7:57:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day.................

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/22/2021 12:55:00 PM

Oh so sweet Paula. Very nice :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2021 7:56:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day.................