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Tension

Teetering, tightrope walking, not the half nor the bike across, nor nightmare clowns. It is not the trembling trapeze, nor the heightened tension inside the big tent with rumbling gray clouds of elephants nor repast of the lion tamer. It could be the oily tendrils of the bearded lady, the short, tall, fat, all of that. Still, I think it was when I was in the hall of mirrors and I laughed until I found out with a scream and a squeal that it was just a regular old mirror, the coaster with its peaks and valleys, sideways, upside- down and clowns…yes, it was the clowns.

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Date: 8/7/2024 2:27:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, well done, Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2024 5:54:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Constance!
Date: 7/17/2024 7:08:00 AM
This is comical in places! And somewhat scary in others! I see you have named you clown in a way lol... second line! good short story, describing tension perfectly! entertaining! Xoxo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2024 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, Crystol! Glad you found the humor, the tension, the fear amidst the lines! xoxo Kim
Date: 7/15/2024 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Tension" write. What a great ending. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2024 5:15:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 7/6/2024 9:00:00 AM
This is quite dramatic Kim... You keep the reader engaged...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2024 9:47:00 AM
Thank you, Silent! I appreciate :) Have a wonderful weekend!
Date: 7/5/2024 12:28:00 PM
I felt that this poem hung between levity and fear. Of course. The title solves the riddle Tension is that in-between feeling. It is a perfect description of an emotion
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2024 7:46:00 PM
Keeps you on the edge of your seat…can you hear the clown laughing…
Date: 7/5/2024 10:57:00 AM
It seems like this is a vulnerable piece, facing self, through the eyes of this poem...maybe I'm wrong,,, glad to read this, and plenty more to catch up on <3 :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2024 7:47:00 PM
For me it was just fun. “It” at the second line is not accidental. I never saw the movie.

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