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Tenor In The Sky

The black cloud Sounding like a herd of buffalo rampaging through a valley. In its... ! . deep... DARK, trembling tenor voice... It spoke- Thunder!

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/14/2024 12:09:00 PM

Hello Charles , i love the sound of thunder. It sounds like the angels having a bowling game. congratulations on hyour POTD. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

I Am Anaya

Date: 1/31/2024 12:31:00 PM

I'm thunderstruck ! Artsy and profound. Congratulations on your POTD Charles Messina!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/30/2024 6:47:00 PM

Dear Charles, hearing the sound of thunder, while rain dances with such force; is somewhat poetic. I agree, a loud *boom* out of no where, will make you jump out of your skin. This is so beautifully written and presented. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Charles Messina
Date: 1/31/2024 4:13:00 AM

Brandy, thank you so much for you kind and lovely comments. My best to you too, my dear friend. Hugs Charlie

Karen Jones

Date: 1/30/2024 6:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your unique potd

Charles Messina
Date: 1/30/2024 6:01:00 PM

Thank you, Karen :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/30/2024 3:55:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD. Tenor in the Sky is a great poem with a surprise ending.. thanks for this enjoyable poem.

Charles Messina
Date: 1/30/2024 5:54:00 PM

Thank you, Hilda. Much appreciated!

Terry Flood

Date: 1/30/2024 3:38:00 PM

I always wonder why ‘He’ so often moves his furniture in the middle of the flaming night! Congrats on POTD, Charley. Terry

Charles Messina
Date: 1/30/2024 5:55:00 PM

LOL- because 'He' can do that. Thanks Terry

Tom Woody

Date: 1/30/2024 1:28:00 PM

Some have compared it to the voice of God. Nice POTD Chas

Charles Messina
Date: 1/30/2024 5:55:00 PM

Thanks Tom!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/30/2024 12:12:00 PM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Charlie :) - Great done :) - hugs

Charles Messina
Date: 1/30/2024 5:56:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise :) hugs

Jim Slaughter

Date: 1/30/2024 10:57:00 AM

Good imagery, Charles...although I think of a black storm cloud as more of a "basso profundo". Congrats on POTD, as well.

Charles Messina
Date: 1/30/2024 5:58:00 PM

Oh yeah, I can hear that (lol) Thanks Jim

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/30/2024 10:55:00 AM

Thunderation, CM. Happy POT Day. ~ gw

Charles Messina
Date: 1/30/2024 5:59:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon!

Warren Doll

Date: 1/30/2024 9:07:00 AM

Charles, how wonderfully descriptive. Congratulations on POTD~ Warren

Charles Messina
Date: 1/30/2024 5:59:00 PM

Thank you, Warren!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/30/2024 8:18:00 AM

Tom, you create a fantastic scene in so few words, making this poem the POTD for a reason. Wonderful Poem, Amazing, Words. Congrats - Blessings, Daniel

Mat Ignacio

Date: 1/30/2024 8:10:00 AM

great image here - powerfully finished

Charles Messina
Date: 1/30/2024 6:00:00 PM

I appreciate your thoughts. Thanks Mat!

Deb M

Date: 1/30/2024 8:06:00 AM

Well done Cheeky Charlie….Congrats on POTD! Debx

Charles Messina
Date: 1/30/2024 6:00:00 PM

Thank you, Deb. Charliex

Chetta Achara

Date: 1/30/2024 7:34:00 AM

I like it!

Charles Messina
Date: 1/30/2024 6:01:00 PM

Thank you, Chetta!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/30/2024 7:12:00 AM

Very emotive Charlie. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)

Charles Messina
Date: 1/30/2024 6:02:00 PM

Thank you, Linda :)

Joseph May

Date: 1/30/2024 7:06:00 AM

Very nicely done Charles, Congrats on POTD

Charles Messina
Date: 1/30/2024 6:02:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph :)

Bill Baker

Date: 1/30/2024 6:46:00 AM

Very creative poetry, Charlie. Engaging and intriguing. Congratulations on your POTD, my friend! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill

Charles Messina
Date: 1/30/2024 6:03:00 PM

Thank you, Bill. Much appreciated!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/30/2024 6:35:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. Short yet a wonderful write/story. Great ending, "It spoke- Thunder!" Love how you use buffalo/thunder. Have a wonderful day with your win................

Charles Messina
Date: 1/30/2024 6:04:00 PM

Thanks for coming back to congratulate me, Paula. I appreciate your kind words and comments.