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Tender Leaves

New born Willow leaves Long stems swaying Swirling in the cold breeze Today Dark clouds Allow few Rays of sunlight Penetrate through small holes Gives hope

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Raul Moreno

Date: 3/31/2010 10:41:00 PM

A beautiful poem you have here, this one is going into my favorites...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 3/26/2010 1:39:00 AM

Nice one Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

James Fraser

Date: 3/24/2010 2:00:00 PM

Wonderful scene your words describe Sara >> James

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/23/2010 4:03:00 PM

enjoyed

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2010 6:51:00 AM

This is truly beautiful Sara. I loved reading this piece. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

Mitch White

Date: 3/23/2010 2:27:00 AM

I like this, it speaks out and flows nicely

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/22/2010 6:43:00 PM

Luv your last line of gives hope.. nice to look at the tneder leaves and dark clouds and rays of sunlight as such... beautiful write full of imagery..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Lynette Chachere

Date: 3/22/2010 3:33:00 PM

i enjoy rainy clouds. i remember when my sister was born, it was sunny out. which explains why she is so bright. great poem. -Always&Forever Lynette