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'tender Invite - Wilma - Ric

Your eyes a tender invite
Sensual moments ignite
Your devotion pure delight 

Can’t wait for tonight... 



Contest: Magnet Marvel
1st Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2013 12:02:00 AM

returning to this cute oldie to ask you which acrostic I see of yours currently posted is NOT for my contest. I will go read it!

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/29/2011 2:28:00 PM

I'm a lttle late, dear Wilma. Sorry about that! My congratulations on your win with this lovely Dodoitsu..very romantic! love, Annalise

Karen Croft

Date: 3/15/2011 4:16:00 PM

lovely poem

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/14/2011 5:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Wilma in Linda-Marie's contest "Magnet Marvel". Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/13/2011 6:31:00 PM

Congratulations on winning in the contest. Nice example of a dodoitsu, Wilma.

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 3/13/2011 3:41:00 PM

Very nice romantic Dodoitsu...Jimmy

John Freeman

Date: 3/13/2011 1:12:00 PM

Great to see you at the top Wilma with this honorable win in first place. Agape, Moses

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 3/13/2011 12:28:00 PM

Thanks so much Wilma for your kind comment to me on"PRAYERS"~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/13/2011 6:18:00 AM

somebody get the ice! Awful warm in here! hot poem Wilma and a great job of it. very sensual. loved it

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 3/12/2011 1:48:00 PM

A fabulous Dodoitsu a great 1st.place win Wilma.Thanks so much for my congrats on"CRYSTAL".~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/12/2011 9:40:00 AM

oheee...nice. congrats. BG

Kash Poet

Date: 3/12/2011 7:14:00 AM

I liked it when I read 1st time.Congrats Wilma on your well deserved 1st place win--kashinath

Jack Horne

Date: 3/12/2011 7:01:00 AM

Well done on your win : ) Jack

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/11/2011 11:29:00 PM

love this first time round, excellect Wilma, congrats. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2011 10:17:00 PM

Great last line you had going on with this one, Wilma! Congrats on your BIG WIN.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/11/2011 7:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your great success in this contest. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/11/2011 6:42:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Linda, Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2011 4:13:00 PM

Congratulations..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/11/2011 3:41:00 PM

There is a gleam in the eye with this delightful write!! :) Congratulations Wilma!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/11/2011 3:27:00 PM

I can't think of a bett place to be then sitting in 1st place or any other place with you my dear Wilma... Congrats Love!!! always huggs from Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/11/2011 2:52:00 PM

Congtsyd Wilma on your first place win in my magnet contest with this stunning entry .. thankxx for your constant support luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/11/2011 4:57:00 AM

thankxx for supporting my current contest Wilma.. good luck luv.. judging this weekend .. know u will amaze me ... happy weekend..with luv...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2011 11:18:00 AM

The "eyes" have it, Wilma. The first thing I noticed when I first saw my late husband were his alluring, cobalt-blue eyes. His eyes prompted love at first sight. What a great poem for my favorites -- brings back some wonderful memories. Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/10/2011 5:13:00 AM

Wonderful poem, best of luck with both, Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2011 12:41:00 AM

thanks wilma,that's good to know