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Non Believer: I have heard, others talk about your god He doesn't sound like a god I wish to know Sitting in heaven high on his throne While I'm left to suffer here all alone Guilty of sins for which I must atone I've called those television evangelists on the phone Put my hands on the screen, as they gave god praise Was that him working in mysterious ways? They say he created everything in just six days No wonder he needed a day of rest He must be more exhausted with all the sins being confessed? I myself could keep him busy for over a year You can't imagine what's on my chest It goes even deeper compacted and pressed So why? I ask why Why do I need a god of fairy tales Hung on a cross with nails Him who is righteous and me who always fails Tell me? Yes tell me I really want to know Believer: I too would not want to know that god Distant sitting on a throne While we suffer all alone Burdened by sins for which we can't atone Confessing to some fraud on a telephone I will let others sing their false praises With their religiosity and New Age Crazes Repeating pseudo wise lines and rehearsed phrases Placing unsuspecting seekers in guilded cages I sit here and wonder What is there for me to tell? I have no magic spell God isn't a product to sell Let others try to argue and yell I cannot convince you what to feel You believing in God doesn't make Him real He has always exisisted Deeper than any feeling Not just a fairytale Abstract and appealing He says "Come to me all you who are weary" A God of compassion Not a "Big Bang Theory" Because I know Jesus I'm thankful and teary He has answers to question's that can't be answered by "Siri" It's hard understanding a God you don't know When you feel tossed by life's waves to and fro Reach out your hand, my God won't let go Look in my eyes See God's reflection With his heart I witness your perfection You are not some evolutionary collection Formed from cosmic dust or random selection You are Loved that's why Jesus died for you His love intimate Freely given and true Unearnable by things you think you have to do He patiently knocks at your door and waits for you if you open the door you will believe in Him too I speak from my heart and these words are true Non Believer: We each have our own truth is what I believe Yours is original sin, Adam and Eve Yet your God is intimate as well One who Loved us even though we fell I'll keep my mind open and wait for a sign If he's real, perhaps one day He'll be mine Give me your book I'll read and test it line by line Perhaps the water in my veins Will turn into living wine When with the King I dine! Reposting after reading Miraj's thought provoking poem "In Search of God". This is a creative exercise between myself and my friend Eileen. I've chosen to take on the persona of a non believer who is questioning. I look forward to her response, it should make for an interesting conversation. I put Eileen on the spot with this one by posting it before she viewed it. Her creative process is different than mine and I should have respected that. Eileen sent me some soup mails with some creative ideas which I have weaved into my story. Thanks for the inspiration Eileen, we will take on another collaboration soon.

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Date: 5/5/2019 8:37:00 AM
We all seek answers Rich . . . mostly the same ones Perhaps we will all be answered together! A great and worthwhile piece !
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/6/2020 6:23:00 PM
Thanks Peter.
Date: 6/12/2016 9:17:00 PM
It's all upto us whether we believe or deny His presence...For those who deny, I have nothing else to say ..but I know for sure that one day they will see the truth. They just need to open their Hearts !! Brilliant collaboration ...!!! I am just faving it.....:))))) Hugs ~Red~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/12/2016 11:22:00 PM
What a thoughtful comment Red. Also thanks for the 7. Hugs Rick.
Date: 6/8/2016 11:55:00 PM
Richard, I loved this, 7 ~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2016 7:08:00 AM
Thanks Constance. :0)
Date: 6/7/2016 4:55:00 PM
Thanks for sharing, it flows eloquent.........A.M.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2016 7:09:00 AM
Thanks A.M.
Date: 6/7/2016 4:17:00 PM
Great to see this re-posted - the part about the TV evangelists reminds me of the song 'Jesus he knows me' by Phil Collins lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2016 7:12:00 AM
I'll have to look up the lyrics, you have me curious.
Date: 6/7/2016 3:47:00 PM
Your connection to God is ever real. No one can know you and not believe that you have seen and know your maker. Blessed be Love Mom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/7/2016 4:03:00 PM
Blessed indeed. Thanks mom, I love you too.
Date: 6/7/2016 3:12:00 PM
"Look in my eyes....see God's reflection." I do...and you are the real deal when it comes to spirituality, Richard. Your poetry speaks of a living connection. Beautiful
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/7/2016 4:03:00 PM
You are sweet Eileen, I wish I had your depth of knowledge concerning the scriptures. Hugs Rick.
Date: 6/7/2016 2:19:00 PM
Excellent!! I understand that what I'm reading is a collaboration between you, Richard, and Eileen. Correct me if I'm wrong. Regards // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/7/2016 4:01:00 PM
Actually I wrote them all. I kind of sprung the idea on her without checking ahead of time. She had sent me a soup mail which helped me crystallize my thoughts on the piece.
Date: 6/6/2016 8:18:00 PM
Wow, amazing, even you say a non believer, I couldn't help feeling, it was from a believer, saying, dont judge, don't preach, there are many roads and paths to goodness, I could be wrong, I just felt the underlying meaning this way, and I can say this one thing, I know good when I see it, and the names Richard and Eileen, well they bring me joy and smiles.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/7/2016 12:38:00 AM
In the process of sharing my thoughts I forgot to say thanks for commenting Arthur.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/7/2016 12:37:00 AM
There are numerous non believers who are wonderful and moral people. As believers we can't convert anyone. I believe I am called to share my personal experience, I'm not called to argue with someone who doesn't believe the same as me. It makes me upset when I witness this kind of behavior.
Date: 6/6/2016 7:56:00 PM
I remember this one Richard. I love it.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/6/2016 7:57:00 PM
Thanks Tim!;0)
Date: 6/6/2016 9:04:00 AM
For the believer no proof is necessary and for the non-believer no proof is sufficient. Blessed those who believe for the path that leads to light and truth will find! Divine poem dear, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/6/2016 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios.
Date: 6/6/2016 6:23:00 AM
I remember this poem, it is really good. I'm glad you re-posted it.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/6/2016 7:47:00 AM
Thanks Becca.;0)
Date: 6/5/2016 8:53:00 PM
Richard, this was a really engaging poem, and concept, putting yourself in the shoes of the doubtful ... it's easy to understand those that think it's all a big fraud and scam, when it's misrepresented by televangelists who are just out to make easy money. Sincerely penned, my friend, with a message to convey. Respect.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/6/2016 7:52:00 AM
sadly not all who represent themselves as Christians have honourable intentions. Thanks for commenting Timothy.
Date: 6/5/2016 11:05:00 AM
OH my!!!I never wanted this poem to end. Yes Sir Richard,I could so deeply relate to yours and Eileen's thoughts with my own that I understood line by line what this poem has to say.I too decided to take a role of an atheist in the first half of my poem "In search of God." and then slowly bring that atheist to reason in the second half,which was the most tough part,as I had to imagine myself as a "God" and I struggled a lot...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/5/2016 5:10:00 PM
I think you poem is excellent my friend. I scripture it promises "Seek and Ye shall find." So I have no doubt that God will reveal Himself to you.
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Miraj Raha
Date: 6/5/2016 11:18:00 AM
and lastly my special thanks to Eileen for collaborating and presenting a poem that is enough to change a person.
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Miraj Raha
Date: 6/5/2016 11:17:00 AM
...So this poem shines where I have failed,but still I am satisfied that that my thoughts in the second half have great similarity with yours,Yes Sir we think alike.This poem is a breath of fresh air and word of hope for both atheists and believers and should be read by everybody.Going straight into my fav.
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Miraj Raha
Date: 6/5/2016 11:13:00 AM
...Hence I can't say my poem is a success for it is impossible to speak the word of our "Almighty" as a mortal.Your poem on the other hand,your poem is a bit different than mine,You expressed your feelings and thoughts which are exclusively yours...

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