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Teddy Bear-

My sweet little Teddy Bear...
Mommy gave 'YOU' to me
Now I never sleep alone at night
The comfort you gave, when God's sunny eyes ran out of light

You are my sweet little teddy bear... 
You kept me company throughout the years
I hugged you, when my eyes were full of tears
Loving you, squeezing you
We both express many joyful dance of cheers
Together we sang lullabies, without you singing one single word
We drank from the same teacup, whispered about the pretty birds
Now listen, as I mumble extra words into your ear
My sweet Teddy Bear, you are always here

We snuggled every night staring at the star frame window
"You held my hand when I was lost in my own imaginary limbo

My sweet little Teddy Bear...
I'm 11 now, and my mother loves me dearly
Sadly, she felt it's time to find me a daddy
Little does she knows, my daddy visits every night in my dreams

Shhhhhh!!!
Now her boyfriend visits my room and tells me not to scream
Little Teddy bear, I never showed you fear before I fell asleep
Little Teddy bear, tonight I do not want to count sheep
Teddy bear, now I hold you closer and tighter than before
Little Teddy Bear let me cover your ears, from the screeching door
Little Teddy Bear, he said he would hurt mommy If I tell anyone
Little Teddy Bear, I know you see and hear everything!!!

by; pd
You're A Little Kid Again (contest)
The View of an 11 year old

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/29/2014 7:28:00 AM
You touch on very emotive subject and use such tenderness. Beautifully written. To be able to see through the eyes of a child. Brilliant, thank you.
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Date: 10/1/2013 8:16:00 PM
creepy, poem, I MUST SAY!!! love it sis.......................SKAT
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Date: 9/30/2013 9:27:00 AM
Hi, my dearest sis! I do well remember this great winning masterpiece of urs. A very lovely super touching poem w/c was extra-ordinarily well crafted by a super talented & greatest poet of mine. Embracing it tight once again & My big hearty congratulations on ur super win! Big big hugs! Well, how are you? Hope you're doing fine & so w/ your love ones. I 4-got 2 say ur very much welcome for the things I've sent. Always my greatpleasure! Thanks as well for everything! lovem4evr your poet sis Leo
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Date: 9/30/2013 5:57:00 AM
congrats on your win Linda....
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Date: 9/29/2013 8:11:00 PM
I am a teddy bear lover. You stole my breath with this wrote. Much thanks for your entry, and congrats on the well-deserved win. Love, Juli-Michelle
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Juli- Michelle
Date: 9/29/2013 8:12:00 PM
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Date: 9/29/2013 7:46:00 PM
wow...this one touches with it's sad content...powerful well written poem, I hope this was not really true of your childhood....congrats on your win....hugs
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Date: 3/2/2013 10:39:00 AM
very cool song btw-- and can you believe it? I haven't really fully watched Wizard of Oz, so I am just imagining how that song sounds like, cool how you replaced Kansas with the Philippines though ;) I am just winging the melody-- to lazy and sleepy to search youtube now
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Date: 3/2/2013 10:38:00 AM
ooh my captcha said "PSPD" -- so P.S. PD--> I just read your last comment asking me why I am hiding--not really hiding, but more of taking a break that happened to land me in a place where I got quite busy that it was simpler to keep out of here....but yes admittedly, I did miss being here, only thing is I can't spend a lot of time here--so this is like a once in a blue moon thing for me now--
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Date: 3/2/2013 10:35:00 AM
haha, but yeah, as usual, I extended, but seriously so nice to hear from you, pd! :) I had a good bday, felt the love so that humbled me.
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Date: 3/2/2013 10:34:00 AM
I remember reading this and thinking how heart wrenching, still is after all this time-- and ahh, no wonder it got returned back to me! I will re-send it one of these days, I had even enclosed some stickers for Ezzelle....yup, I still have you on YM-- I will catch you online soon, ok? my internet's slow, what's new? so it's taking forever to post here. grr. I was supposed to sleep now,
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Date: 2/7/2013 1:17:00 PM
Congrats P.D. I'm catching up on some winning writes and I am glad I read this wonderful piece of yours today. Keep the sun shinning in your heart always. :) Tanya
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Date: 2/5/2013 9:18:00 AM
awwww... nice one pd!
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apoorva patrikar
Date: 2/5/2013 9:19:00 AM
congrats!
Date: 1/30/2013 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations !! Wonderful poem !!
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Date: 1/30/2013 8:47:00 AM
My biggest hearty congratulations on your first and super win my dearest sis and only greatest poet, PD! I'm really so glad to see you on top of the winners list. This is really a marvelous and outstanding entry. Another great masterpiece! I'm so sorry, I've missed to read it before. I also do have teddy bears. In fact, they're 2. I hug them every night. Their names derived from my favs :). Again, congratulations! love always & 4ever, Leonora
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Date: 1/30/2013 3:00:00 AM
Oh yes PD...I remember well this shocking and devestating gem... I know it's not about you but it unfortunately happens often...I am a proud step-father who raised three wonderful and beautiful step-daughters from childhood and am proud to say that I NEVER considered such a perverted and evil act!...However, a nosy-idiot 'friend' of my wife once warned her to keep an eye on me!...Needless to say, my wife slapped her silly...Congrats, my friend - Tim
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 1/30/2013 3:37:00 AM
Ok!...One more time and I quit! Step-daughters AND daughters often get 'crushes', making them easy prey...the same is true for boys...I remember well having a MONSTER crush on my step-mother...it's a wierd world...
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 1/30/2013 3:10:00 AM
It also makes me very angry that sexual abuse by step-fathers gives decent and loving ones a bad name...I honestly believe that when some people learn that you are a step-father, somewhere in the back of their minds they think, 'Uh-oh, I wonder...
Date: 1/29/2013 9:29:00 PM
Linda Congratultions on a very well deserved win.I hope this is just fiction and not a reality. If it isn't fiction, then I can empathise with you. I know how you would be feeling. Well done. Very sad and touching. Love Pam
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Date: 1/29/2013 2:36:00 PM
PD a well deserved win. A childhood lost, but fight your demons, and forgive yourself and the one who hurt you. It's difficult, but not impossible. Be true to yourself my friend. Warm Wishes, Connie
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Date: 1/29/2013 1:36:00 PM
Sweet, with a sour twist!!! A clever and touching composition, RAY
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Date: 1/29/2013 11:02:00 AM
Dear Linda, a childhood stolen can never be truly repaired from so heavy an invisiable burden the mind can't erase. Your heartfelt poem reveals this sorrow poignantly. Congratulations on your deserving First Place win!
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Date: 1/29/2013 8:47:00 AM
A sweet and yet horror filled winner I pray this is just your empathetic poetic tongue speaking. Congratulations, Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/29/2013 6:54:00 AM
You have felt with a horrible subject in a very sensitive way. You are a gifted writer. I pray this was not your reality. Congratulations on a well deserved win.
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Date: 1/29/2013 6:39:00 AM
Big congratulations on your grand win my dear PD. excellent write as always. Cheers!!! thanks for stopping by on my poem. :) big hug from me to you!!
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Date: 1/29/2013 5:26:00 AM
a melancholy write PD ......congrats on your win
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Date: 1/28/2013 11:39:00 PM
P.D. the words are so heart sent, I feel sad that they were necessary. Ted brought you love, always ready to cwtch, an ear to tell all the truths too. Thank God for all the Ted's....Seren
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Date: 1/28/2013 10:21:00 PM
oh wow, left me kinda speechless, Linda. congrats on your well deserved first place with this emotion-driven entry
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