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Tears of Oblivion

Tears Of Oblivion I stand at the edge of eternity As I approach the gates of time Oblivion is silencing in waiting To see if you committed a crime If I walk in strong like a lion Eternity can devour me whole If I should shed a single tear Oblivion can take my only soul Walking the corridors of time The tears of oblivion do exist With shivering shadows standing For I have walked in their midst. July.02.2017 SUMMER SOLSTICE PREMIERE CONTEST Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 7/19/2017 1:38:00 PM
You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.
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Date: 7/6/2017 12:47:00 AM
A lion with wings, that would be pretty cool. I am quite sure that you have walked the corridors of time WW, many a time. Good luck in the contest. In my eyes you are the winner my friend...Maria
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Date: 7/4/2017 3:36:00 PM
Oh wow, this is really good. I especially love the last line. Beautiful work ^WW^
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Date: 7/3/2017 6:39:00 AM
Really cool and strong. This one speaks loudly but calmly, there is a certain confidence in your words. Nicely done. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 7/2/2017 11:14:00 AM
I have the distinct feeling that you would fly in on those warrior wings and be accepted for who you are. Like this one, ^WW^.
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Date: 7/2/2017 9:43:00 AM
Oh, I love this one, my friend! Really well done!
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