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Tears From Heaven

The sky is crying My plants no longer dying Refreshing raindrops 08~15~14 Written for PD’s contest Any Poem Under 5 Lines #2 ~awarded 4th place~

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James Fraser

Date: 9/5/2014 5:28:00 PM

I'm writing through tears, because I know whom you write. One guitarist whom you adore, the other I'll right. I'll right it because, to me he's simply class. Like Clapton, he likes to be flash. But this guy I mention, I've written before, for the two that we've mentioned, live through our pores - many hugs, James = I'll post and you will know the other guy, your words have showed = Chowa....xx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2014 5:35:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment as ever James. When i lived on the UK mainland I saw Clapton in concert twice - awesome :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 9/4/2014 2:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win, Jan! After dry weather rain is so refreshing and welcome! Very enjoyable haiku! /x/ paul

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2014 2:51:00 PM

Thanks as ever for your continued support Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/4/2014 5:20:00 AM

I loved visualizing your imagery in this piece Jan. Big congrats on your win with this little gem! I love hearing and watching the rain.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2014 6:38:00 AM

Many thanks for dropping by Connie i do appreciate your support:-) Hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/3/2014 11:29:00 PM

Congrats Jan. Short and sweet. Congratulation on your win with your weight scale dilemma also.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2014 11:33:00 PM

Thanks as ever Brenda and I am so so pleased for both Tim and myself but Tim deserved the kudos for his part in the write turning it into a sonnet.. but he is such a lovely man to share the honour with me:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2014 10:45:00 PM

always...PD

Tim Smith
Date: 9/3/2014 10:47:00 PM

Yes we won :)....got an hour sleep...now heading to work

Tim Smith

Date: 9/3/2014 10:41:00 PM

Congrats Jan,...aka footles queen... Aka blunder woman ....aka Stan.....hugs Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 9/3/2014 10:47:00 PM

See above...lol

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2014 10:45:00 PM

Thanks Tim, I have no other words for you other than fabulous amazing friend:-) Hope you enjoyed the game and your team won:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2014 10:37:00 PM

Hi Jan, Congratulations, on your win:) Stop by and enjoy my blog, "Edgar Allan Poe" if you'd like or have time. Always ~LINDA~

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2014 10:43:00 PM

Many thanks Linda for my placement great contest as ever:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/17/2014 6:23:00 PM

Yes, I agree. Loved your poem much and enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 8/17/2014 6:24:00 PM

Many thanks for your lovely comment BL Hugs jan xxx

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/16/2014 12:04:00 PM

Amen for rain. Don't say that word up here in MI...especially Detroit. Flooded!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2014 12:09:00 PM

Oh dear hope it gets back to normal soon - some terrible hardships and tragedies with the flooding here in the UK:-( Hugs jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/16/2014 12:46:00 AM

Wow Jan, refreshing rain n fine haiku! good luck !

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2014 4:15:00 AM

Thank you so much for your comment Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2014 11:42:00 PM

I love the rhyming aspect of this one. so refreshing is the rain.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2014 4:15:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/15/2014 4:20:00 PM

Lovely haiku, Jan...Reminds me of a song about flowers..."Oh I guess they've learned the secret. Even little flowers know...If it never never rains...then we'll never never grow." Wonderful write here...Tears of heaven...Good luck in contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2014 4:26:00 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Eileen i do so appreciate your continued support:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Christine Costello

Date: 8/15/2014 4:09:00 PM

As a gardener-I love this poem!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2014 4:18:00 PM

Thank you so much Christine - me too i hate having to fill up the water butts from the hose much prefer the rain to fill them and we do get a lot of it in the UK at times! Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/15/2014 3:41:00 PM

Yay! Rain is such a wonderful thing, refreshing and rejuvinating! :) I dig your tears from heaven!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2014 3:44:00 PM

Thanks Cas - felt a bit like crying - but i won't! This was my way of coping with it and I feel brighter now:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/15/2014 3:36:00 PM

How wonderful Jan...do you have Eric Clapton on the brain.....hugs Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 8/15/2014 3:46:00 PM

Lol

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2014 3:43:00 PM

I've seen Eric Clapton in concert twice Tim - hes incredible but I wasn't thinking of the sad sad beautiful song when I was doing the title - was just trying to be creative:-) Have an awesome weekend with the kids:-) Hugs Jan xxxx * Didn't know Eric had written one called Juicy Melons LOL!!!