Tanka Tears

Anguish I suffer My wounded soul bleeds for thee A torn ruptured heart Tears of sorrows I have shed To thee would give my last breath 2/8/2015 Contest: Tanka Tears Sponsor: Rick Parise

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/20/2015 3:55:00 PM

Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Eve Roper
Date: 2/20/2015 4:33:00 PM

Thank you, Debbie. Blessings eve

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2015 9:56:00 PM

beautiful imagery... Linda

Eve Roper
Date: 2/18/2015 10:27:00 PM

Thank you, Linda. Blessings dear friend eve

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/16/2015 7:20:00 AM

Eve, soooo good my great poetess.Congratulations on win..love

Eve Roper
Date: 2/18/2015 10:29:00 PM

Thank you, Rajat, dear friend, you make me feel proud. Blessings dear friend eve

Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 11:56:00 PM

Eve, Awesome Tanka Tears win. ~Skat~

Eve Roper
Date: 2/18/2015 10:30:00 PM

Thank you, Skat, for the wonderful compliment. Blessings eve

Jan Allison

Date: 2/15/2015 11:31:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations:-) Eve Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 2/15/2015 7:29:00 PM

Thank you dear friend. Your company always welcome. Blessings eve

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/15/2015 10:01:00 AM

Just swinging back dear friend with huge congratulations on your well-deserved win! Bravo! Pandita

Eve Roper
Date: 2/15/2015 7:31:00 PM

Thank you, Pandita for your compliment and wonderful visit. Blessings eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2015 11:06:00 AM

this one is a keen expression of your deep sorrow. soulful.

Eve Roper
Date: 2/14/2015 6:58:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, for your compliment.Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day dear friend Eve

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/12/2015 4:33:00 PM

Such deep words from the heart and soul, Even. Your lament really pierces the heart. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra

Eve Roper
Date: 2/12/2015 5:13:00 PM

Sandra, you are so wonderful with your kind words. Thank you dear friend

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/12/2015 1:24:00 PM

Flooding emotions in heart, wonderfully expressed. Surely 7 i feel here. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl"

Eve Roper
Date: 2/12/2015 5:15:00 PM

BL Devnath, thank you for your wonderful inspiring words. Blessings dear friend Eve

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/10/2015 2:40:00 PM

Very emotive work that speaks of a broken heart..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Eve Roper
Date: 2/10/2015 5:08:00 PM

Thank you, Sara, so very much for the wonderful comment you gave for this write. I so appreciate it, Blessings Eve

Paul Callus

Date: 2/10/2015 3:42:00 AM

Expressive, beautiful in its sadness. The sentiments of 'giving' flow throughout. #7 Well done! // paul

Eve Roper
Date: 2/10/2015 12:03:00 PM

Thank you, Paul, for your inspiring compliment. Blessings Eve

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/9/2015 10:24:00 PM

Suffering is the source of wisdom for only then the soul is ploughed! Superb Tanka with a profound meaning! Good luck dear Eve!

Eve Roper
Date: 2/9/2015 10:55:00 PM

Thank you my friend, you are so right.

Robert Johnson

Date: 2/9/2015 7:58:00 PM

The soul is at the mercy of a heart that loves so deep. Beautiful tanka Eve. Peace. :)

Eve Roper
Date: 2/9/2015 10:56:00 PM

Thank you, Robert, for your wonderful comment. Blessings Eve

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/9/2015 7:35:00 PM

"to thee would give my last breath" such a close to your poem of loss and tears yet still love cannot be assuaged, Beautiful. Love Shane xxx

Eve Roper
Date: 2/9/2015 10:57:00 PM

Thank you, Shane, for your wonderful compliment. Blessings eve

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 2/9/2015 4:36:00 PM

So beautiful, such unselfish sentiments

Eve Roper
Date: 2/9/2015 4:49:00 PM

Etienne, thank you, it really means a lot to know everyone likes it even if it doesn't make it. Blessings Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/9/2015 2:47:00 PM

- Yes, really tears of sorrows you have shed - deeply moving written dear Eve! - Luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper
Date: 2/9/2015 4:30:00 PM

Anne-Lise, thank you for your inspiring words. Blessings dear friend Eve

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/9/2015 1:52:00 PM

Excellent pen Eve! Well written sad tanka, my dearest friend. In His light! God bless! :) Love n hugs! xxx D."

Eve Roper
Date: 2/9/2015 4:29:00 PM

Thank you,Dorian, for the wonderful inspiring compliment. Blessing sweet friend Eve

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/9/2015 8:55:00 AM

My friend, I felt your sorrow in this sad piece! Brilliant work! Pandita.

Eve Roper
Date: 2/9/2015 4:27:00 PM

Thank you,Pandita, for the wonderful inspiring compliment. I need to visit you more often. Blessing dear friend Eve

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/9/2015 5:45:00 AM

Touching Tanka Eve... lov, nad!

Eve Roper
Date: 2/9/2015 4:26:00 PM

Thank you,Nadiya, for your kind words . Blessing Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 2/9/2015 4:02:00 AM

deep and sad tanka - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 2/9/2015 4:25:00 PM

Thank you, Jan, for the inspirational compliment . Blessing dear friend Eve

Constance La France

Date: 2/9/2015 1:15:00 AM

Eve, your tanka of tears is heartbreaking, that last line is wonderful, best of luck in the contest and thanks for the visit ~~

Eve Roper
Date: 2/9/2015 4:24:00 PM

Thank you,Broken Wing, for the wonderful compliment. Blessing dear friend Eve

Tim Smith

Date: 2/8/2015 11:14:00 PM

Very heartfelt Eve...hugs Tim

Eve Roper
Date: 2/9/2015 4:22:00 PM

Thank you dear friend for the compliment, I hope you’re staying warm. The weather has changed for us and it is wonderful. Blessing dear friend Eve