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as we walked the beach the pink skies softened the tide and smoothed lines in our faces.... your hand reached out to mine to touch a girl you once knew ____________________ 4/2/15

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 2:34:00 PM

Carrie Awesome win...Linda

Skat A

Date: 4/18/2015 12:15:00 PM

Carrie:) Congratulations, on your awesome Tanka win. SKAT

Edward Ebbs

Date: 4/11/2015 8:24:00 AM

Returning to say congrats, Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2015 11:58:00 PM

this was my favorite in the whole contest. Congrats on a top win.

James Fraser

Date: 4/9/2015 1:47:00 PM

Love the emotions that resonate from within your Tanka Carrie, very nice indeed, hugs, James :)

Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 4/8/2015 11:45:00 PM

Very nice, i loved the entire pictures painted in this poem, Nice love poem Congs from Bryan

Tammy Reams

Date: 4/7/2015 8:14:00 PM

Congrats on your Tanka. Beautiful write!

Faye Gibson

Date: 4/7/2015 5:56:00 PM

Hi, Carrie...really, really love this one, as I always love your writing. So beautiful with a touch of nostalgic sadness. Congratulations.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2015 4:55:00 PM

Congrats!! I knew it was a winner..Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 4/7/2015 4:39:00 PM

Carrie, congratulations on this descriptive tanka win and a 7. Blessings

John Lawless

Date: 4/7/2015 4:15:00 PM

Carrie, I think I've been there. congrats on a well deserved placement with this sweetly poignant tanka

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/7/2015 3:52:00 PM

Carrie, congratulations on your podium win for your lovely Tanka. I really felt the emotion in your words of the years gone by in a loving relationship. Tanka