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Tank-A-Crostic On Twins

T twined by destined stars W we link through same cosmic thoughts I into aligned waves... N nurturing ordained vows,yet S soulmates' fate, never we'll meet .

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/30/2024 12:46:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write again. Have a blessed day writing away...........

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/30/2024 7:10:00 AM

Wow! Congrats, Kabayan... Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start till the end... God bless you.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/29/2024 8:08:00 PM

Nette, this beautiful poem almost moved me to tears. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2024 2:40:00 PM

I loved this one but only did not like the last word of second line going to a new line. Is it because of your cell phone? This one is so mysterious. Congrats, Nette.

Nette Onclaud
Date: 7/29/2024 2:43:00 PM

yes, andie...cellphone limitations...big thanks and huggs

Silent One

Date: 7/15/2024 2:41:00 PM

Great idea and nicely done..

Jack Horne

Date: 7/13/2024 10:10:00 AM

what a beautiful acrostic, Nette - so glad to see you back on Soup!

Ink Empress

Date: 7/13/2024 5:06:00 AM

Deeply moving tanka well written and delivered. Love the word youv chosen here too and also “we link through same cosmic thoughts” yes a connection beyond words can depict. Pleasure reading: best wishes

Paul Callus

Date: 7/13/2024 12:15:00 AM

This is an excellent Tankacrostic, Nette, and I like the ending. I believe that the decisions we make determines our fate. ~ Best regards // paul

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/12/2024 10:30:00 PM

so sad final, enjoyed your delicate poem yann

Valsa George

Date: 7/12/2024 8:04:00 PM

The last line made me sigh. Sometimes such things happen. I know a pair of twins who were made orphans through their mother's death and were fated to live separate and part their ways . So well composed dear Nette.