Tangled Feelings

In strange lit areas Openness great strength Fires burn deep within Anger furrows below Russell Sivey

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/10/2011 1:58:00 AM

This one sure is so true, I really liked how you started this, sort of like the fiery counterpart for "still waters run deep"-- that's what I think :) Enjoyed this Russel and thank you so much for your comments on my Little Mermaid write :) I bet your sister knew all the songs in that movie-- you probably did, too! I personally loved Sebastian there :D

Tim B

Date: 8/9/2011 10:10:00 PM

Yes indeed sir, a nicely worded expression of hidden emotions, twisted tangled feelings such a good title as well. Those feelings do indeed hide amongst the caverns of the soul in strangely lit areas.

James Fraser

Date: 8/9/2011 8:16:00 PM

Eruption could be imminent in situations like this, and like nature, they could be catastrophic :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2011 4:49:00 PM

So many people live their lives with these emotions underground waiting to bubble up..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 8/9/2011 4:26:00 AM

Well written Russell....!!!!!!!!luv Chiquita