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Tangled Dream

The forest was lush green and dripping of moss and rain,
Glittering flowing streams meandered past dark foliage and trees;
          And wild flowers dropped their petals into the water,
Where they drifted down waterfalls into sapphire blue lakes.

     I listened deeply to the rippling water kissing the wet rocks,
And the forest was loudly chirping and breathing and beckoning me;
          Then I heard my name being called from a faraway place,
It undulated in the tangled branches and whispered on the wind.

     The voice called my name over and over and I ran towards it,
My sobbing a loud moaning wail lost in the vast forest and streams;
           Then,it was dark night, the blue sky had withered away,
The stars trembled as I ran through the maze . . .
            
                                                      Then, I awoke . . . weeping.

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November 4, 2013


Poetry/Verse/Tangled Dream
Copyright Protected, ID 13-1013-771-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


Submitted into the contest, 
Mid April 2019 Premiere Contest,
sponsor, Brian Strand

Sixth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Congratulations on your win. Sadness described in elegant verse.
Carber Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 8:13 AM
Wow! This particular contest has a lot of very cool poems, and this is one of them-- great imagery, and I love the ending-- congrats Broken Wings!
Haight Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 8:47 PM
Very lovely, Constance. Congratulations on another fine win! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 5:25 PM
just beautiful Constance, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Knight Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 11:08 AM
WOW!WOW!WOW!, your writing is so beautiful, BW, This poem raves off the beauty within your Tangled Dream of poetic charm. No wonder you won, amazing, amazing. Congrats on your win.
Richards Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 10:11 AM
you have painted us a lovely scene !!! Just beautiful !! congrats to you, Constance!!
Gauthier Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Lovely luscious imagery. Congrats on a well deserved win, BW.
George   Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Wow! So vivid both the picture and your rendering. Many congrats on your win, dear Constance. Elaine
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