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The forest was lush green and dripping of moss and rain, Glittering flowing streams meandered past dark foliage and trees; And wild flowers dropped their petals into the water, Where they drifted down waterfalls into sapphire blue lakes. I listened deeply to the rippling water kissing the wet rocks, And the forest was loudly chirping and breathing and beckoning me; Then I heard my name being called from a faraway place, It undulated in the tangled branches and whispered on the wind. The voice called my name over and over and I ran towards it, My sobbing a loud moaning wail lost in the vast forest and streams; Then,it was dark night, the blue sky had withered away, The stars trembled as I ran through the maze . . . Then, I awoke . . . weeping. ______________________ November 4, 2013 Poetry/Verse/Tangled Dream Copyright Protected, ID 13-1013-771-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted into the contest, Mid April 2019 Premiere Contest, sponsor, Brian Strand Sixth Place

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Date: 4/19/2018 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Sadness described in elegant verse.
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Date: 4/19/2018 8:13:00 AM
Wow! This particular contest has a lot of very cool poems, and this is one of them-- great imagery, and I love the ending-- congrats Broken Wings!
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Date: 4/18/2018 8:47:00 PM
Very lovely, Constance. Congratulations on another fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/18/2018 5:25:00 PM
just beautiful Constance, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/18/2018 11:08:00 AM
WOW!WOW!WOW!, your writing is so beautiful, BW, This poem raves off the beauty within your Tangled Dream of poetic charm. No wonder you won, amazing, amazing. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/18/2018 10:11:00 AM
you have painted us a lovely scene !!! Just beautiful !! congrats to you, Constance!!
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Date: 4/18/2018 9:15:00 AM
Lovely luscious imagery. Congrats on a well deserved win, BW.
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Date: 4/18/2018 7:50:00 AM
Wow! So vivid both the picture and your rendering. Many congrats on your win, dear Constance. Elaine
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