Tangible Dreams

In the midst of darkness descending 
above me, 
Stillness seems to overtake sound, 
Allowing moments for deep thought 
in this mirror of solitude.

I tend to reminisce on those dreams I 
grab from the photogenic events of 
the past.

Once touched, I’m taken back by the 
moments that can’t be replaced. 

So during this moment of tranquility; 
I pray no external force interrupts 
this, 
The calm waters in my mind. 

Lucky for me, it’s a reoccurring dream; 
And as vivid as these fantasies are, 
None compare to the peaceful illusions 
of family gatherings. 

It was only yesterday, when I illustrated thoughts 
of a child, 
Always curious of that deep ocean floor, 
Where familiar kin paint their residence ; 
I was an eyewitness to many overlooked 
areas within my family’s ocean. 

Yet with many pieces missing as a result of 
loved ones ascending to a higher cause, 
This puzzle remains incomplete until that 
last tomorrow.

However in these possible moments 
of delusion; 
I’m a child again touching the fabric 
of my influential past.

As I continue this unforgettable daydream,
I ask again for no interruption; 
For with every reminiscent moment, 
I know of myself better and what I 
could be in a tangible future.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bartholomew Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 4:18 AM
wow...i love this poem, it's beautiful :)
Clemons Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 6:04 AM
Thanks Cortney
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November 7, 2014 at 10:20 AM
Excellent, Jiril! Beautiful dreams of love and family are the best ones. Congrats...love and blessings, Rhonda
Clemons Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 5:11 PM
Thanks Rhonda.
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October 12, 2014 at 12:21 PM
Congrats on this fine win...Sharon G.
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October 12, 2014 at 7:18 PM
Thanks Sharon. Appreciate the love.
A   Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 8:08 AM
any time... PD
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May 30, 2014 at 11:57 PM
Jiril, nice win....SKAT
Clemons Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 12:12 AM
Thank you Skat A.
A   Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 6:23 PM
thank you for commenting my comment Jiril, that is nice of you...PD
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May 29, 2014 at 10:53 PM
Of course. Thank you for your kind comments on my poetry.
A   Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 4:52 PM
JIRIL, CONGRATULATIONS, enjoying your winning poem in Isaiah's DREAM paint contest.... hugs...Linda
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May 29, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Thanks Linda. Appreciate the love
Devonshire Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 3:06 PM
Hi Jiril, Sometimes dreams do evoke memories of our youth, surrounded by our family. These are the best dreams I have. You describe them vividly. Awesome poem. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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May 26, 2014 at 4:35 PM
Thanks Carolyn. Appreciate the love
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March 17, 2014 at 7:33 PM
Well done ..very beautiful Jiril
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March 17, 2014 at 7:44 PM
Thanks Fatima. Appreciate the love.
Hubbard Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 5:43 PM
WOW! That was just absolutely beautiful!!!! Great job and I felt what I read :)
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January 30, 2014 at 5:56 PM
Thanks Trish. Appreciate the love.
Wacker Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 10:38 AM
beautiful poem I can relate to it.
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January 20, 2014 at 5:08 PM
Thanks Kristen. Appreciate the love.
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January 18, 2014 at 11:29 AM
great poem, i can relate to it.
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January 18, 2014 at 12:36 PM
Thanks Gloria. Appreciate the love.
Law Avatar
January 17, 2014 at 2:17 AM
I agree Great work... enjoy your poetry.... I thank you for the complement on my Poets words too !! Beautiful expressions on the dream
Clemons Avatar
January 17, 2014 at 4:42 PM
Thanks Stacey. Appreciate the love
Marie Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 10:52 AM
That deep ocean floor... Love this. Took my mind out of reality for a few. Great work!
Clemons Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 12:09 PM
Thanks Alyssa
Lamoureux Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 7:26 AM
Searching for yourself in the past, I love it. You have skills my friend. It appears your search was successful.
Clemons Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 7:53 AM
Thank you, Richard. Appreciate it.
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July 19, 2013 at 10:22 PM
Awesome and touching piece written here!!
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July 19, 2013 at 10:24 PM
Thanks Bruh. Appreciate it.
Lanre Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Wow! Lovely piece there, Bro. I am so in there. GL
Clemons Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 8:24 PM
Thanks GL. Appreciate it.
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