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Tamarack

A forest soldier still armored in golden chain guards the Canadian Shield from brooding vines and horizons gray In November's wind, it holds its yellow needles like comrades clasped in feeble arms of wood This tree, an x-ray of late autumn's soul, glows with its ocher pins, deaf to bids of meddling snow. Soft sounds, these falling fibres beating war drums 'gainst an early winter foe Protester at the gate of cold tamarack's ramshackle yellow As shouts of autumn's glory still Poem composed 2020 Revised: February 1/2022

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Date: 10/3/2020 3:51:00 PM
Succinct symbolism depicted that was well-executed, Brian, impressed by your indelible wordings in your condensed submission, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/6/2020 9:49:00 AM
Thank you William. I had hoped the reader would discern the Tamarack symbolically, as a soldier in arms clasping his comrades against the battle raging, still defending a fortress. Best wishes Brian
Date: 5/4/2020 5:00:00 AM
Brian, this is good, and one reading is not enough. It is also a perfect length for re-reading, or multiple visits. Lots of good metaphor & simile. Thanx, Anil Deo
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Date: 5/4/2020 9:03:00 AM
Hello Anil Thank you for the positive feedback. My northern cabin is on the Canadian Shield in Ontario. The Tamarack holds its golden needles tight in the November cold when all is bare about it. Take care. With appreciation Brian

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