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Tale of Two Teardrops

Two teardrops started journey together from beautiful eyes of a lady, how they wished to meet each other to have a talk of sorrow which made them flow today down the silky cheek of that lady; but never could they meet. If someday they could meet, sure they would share their pain and sorrow, for never do they like to spoil the angelic look of her cute terracotta face leaving a trail again and again however dear they are while on their way. © kashinath karmakar ========================= Placement:None; (April 2011) Contest:Personify a tear Sponsor:HGarvey Daniel Esquire By:kashinath karmakar (31st March 2011)

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Date: 4/5/2011 10:57:00 AM
wow...etheree, personification, imagery, holy mackerel - you've got everything...I cannot see why this will not be #1....well done indeed, a pleasure to read such quality poetry.....sincerely...Syd
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Date: 4/4/2011 10:39:00 AM
I totally agree with Gerard. The layout is class Kashinath, and the poetry is wonderful. Good luck in the contest....:)
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Date: 4/3/2011 5:37:00 PM
I give this one the top mark for execution of the style seamlessly. You did a nice job in this format, I must say! Regards, Gerard
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Date: 4/2/2011 1:08:00 PM
Kash another gem from you.. Wishing you all the best for the contest (",) W
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Date: 4/2/2011 9:47:00 AM
Best wishes in the contest. This is a great entry, enjoyed. Em :)
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Date: 4/1/2011 12:00:00 PM
Very very nice imagery in this write, Kashinath:) Best of luck in the contest! Thanks for the comment on "Anatomy of a Cold", much appreciated as always.
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Date: 4/1/2011 11:59:00 AM
Very very nice imagery in this write, Kashinath:) Best of luck in the contest! Thanks for the comment on "Anatomy of a Cold", much appreciated as always.
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Date: 3/31/2011 10:48:00 PM
incredible take you did here, Kashinath-- I just enjoyed how you did yours, and double etheree too! I think you have a knack for this form-- & how you speak of these tears never meeting was just bittersweet & beautiful! Way to go for you on this write :)
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Date: 3/31/2011 7:41:00 PM
Beautiful concept of the tear Kashinath.. the cute terracotta face really is impressive line luv.. good luck in the contest my friend..
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Date: 3/31/2011 2:43:00 PM
ohhh, lovely way to paint a tear, kashi... kinda like what i did but from a differrent perspective... come and visit! winning's best to you...:) hugggs
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Date: 3/31/2011 2:21:00 PM
Hey, you also used a double style like I did. COOL, Kashinath!! I just had my style a different one. Very well done with the awesome etheree style!
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Date: 3/31/2011 12:36:00 PM
Simply beautiful, Kash! You really did give human emotions to these two teardrops. Excellent use of personification. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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