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Take Me Home

Sweet melodies serenade my mind away Times were simple and your smile was sweet Nighttime flashes cross the height of my heart As your echos hum along to our once true love Ambient light flickers in the bare of my soul And this vision is of two, that were meant to be Life's pull grabbed hold and then we were lost But these feelings I hold for you remain steadfast Here I wait, dancing alone in my dreams For the day you come and take me home

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Date: 1/30/2017 10:47:00 AM
Awe, this is sweet, I hope she'll come sooner and take you home rather than later. All the best Tim :) xoxo
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Date: 1/28/2017 11:44:00 PM
Its always nice to dance and dream even when we dance and dream alone...because life is beautiful with or without the one.I really find this poem sweet Tim.
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Date: 1/28/2017 11:42:00 PM
Dancing alone in my dreams. That is a vivid picture, and such a melancholic wish. I hope it will ever come true.
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Date: 1/28/2017 9:00:00 PM
So well expressed, I can feel this one!
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Date: 1/28/2017 6:56:00 PM
Love it. So short but sweet. My kind of poetry!!
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Date: 1/28/2017 4:38:00 PM
So sad to feel alone in this way. If love is true then it will indeed come back to you.
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Date: 1/28/2017 4:10:00 PM
We need to hang on to those dreams Tim and never give up hope:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/28/2017 3:47:00 PM
If only it could be true, but dreams sometimes do come true, great write Tim! Ambient light flickers..bare soul, very nice!
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Date: 1/28/2017 3:22:00 PM
Now that is very sweet, Tim. :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/28/2017 3:23:00 PM
Thanks Heidi

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