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Take a Plunge

The water will hurt me The cold shall run deep Piercing like shattered glasses But not deep - -I must jump I feel it within to go I and the sea are one And such spirit will not let go Unless I learn to jump I fear the tides, The waves riveting past It is big... It may take me whole But he and I are one And such spirit shall never let go Unless I choose to jump The icy, icy water may hurt me The cold indeed runs deep But he, the sea, and I are one And my spirit shall never learn to let go Unless I jump Even then I'll fly and glide He and I will never choose to let go Even now as I jump Past the tides, the waves And even past he =========================== Free Verse Seriously Contest

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Date: 2/23/2011 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win Jan. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:29:00 PM
Hi Jan - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory
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Date: 2/11/2011 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations on winning in Debbie's contest with this entry. This is very descriptive material.
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Date: 2/11/2011 5:22:00 PM
Congrats Jan on your wonderful win in Debbie's contest with this amazing write and entry ... enjoy with luv..
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Date: 1/28/2011 1:42:00 PM
very creative and quite impressive write you have penned on Take a plunge, jan
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Date: 1/28/2011 4:13:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jan. Please continue to share your poetry with us. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. Love, Carol
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