Take a Plunge

The water will hurt me
The cold shall run deep
Piercing like shattered glasses
But not deep -

-I must jump
I feel it within to go
I and the sea are one
And such spirit will not let go
Unless I learn to jump

I fear the tides,
The waves riveting past
It is big... It may take me whole
But he and I are one
And such spirit shall never let go
Unless I choose to jump

The icy, icy water may hurt me
The cold indeed runs deep
But he, the sea, and I are one
And my spirit shall never learn to let go
Unless I jump

Even then I'll fly and glide
He and I will never choose to let go
Even now as I jump
Past the tides, the waves
And even past he

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Brown Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 12:42 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win Jan. Love, Carol
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February 12, 2011 at 2:29 PM
Hi Jan - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory
Pettit Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 6:30 PM
Congratulations on winning in Debbie's contest with this entry. This is very descriptive material.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 5:22 PM
Congrats Jan on your wonderful win in Debbie's contest with this amazing write and entry ... enjoy with luv..
Mehta Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 1:42 PM
very creative and quite impressive write you have penned on Take a plunge, jan
Brown Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 4:13 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jan. Please continue to share your poetry with us. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. Love, Carol
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