Tadpoling Parts 1 and 2

part 1 

We bend low under over-hanging branches
lit by reflected river-light gently shifting. 
Our boots suck the muddy bank.
We wade into clear water
the dappled up-light playing 
on our  serious faces.
Intent on our task
hands plunge. 
Cold-shocked I gasp.
You hold your jar steady.
I scoop mine.
Triumphant in a shower of icy prisms 
we hold our prizes aloft,
laughing and shouting,
water streaming down our arms,
jars teeming with tadpoles.
Faces pressed close 
to these underwater worlds,
we stand transfixed.
Each reflects a small disc
of sparkling  sky.

part 2 

April trees rake scudding clouds.
Far away farm dogs bark
at wind-snatched shouts 
of bird-nesting boys.
Somewhere, a cuckoo calls.

In the back garden
a blackbird stakes out his territory.
Ignoring him the cat purrs,
yawning in the sun.

While unnoticed 
on the garden table
beside a upturned jar, 
a sprinkling
of flattened tadpoles
commas
drying in the sun.

The bored cat
saunters by,
her tail held high
in the shape 
of a question mark.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Jordan Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 4:37 PM
Maggie - Wonderful poem - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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December 16, 2008 at 8:29 PM
Hi Maggie, I remember this from when you originally wrote it. It is one of the most beautiful pieces of writing I have ever read. Thank you so much for sharing it. Lainie
Winter Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 5:09 PM
Maggie, this was amazing. Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday season. Love, Shar
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December 15, 2008 at 6:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Maggie. Love, Carol
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September 10, 2008 at 3:51 AM
Congrats, a pleasant to read!
Coet Avatar
August 27, 2008 at 12:11 PM
Way to go Maggie. Great pen. Well deserved top three win. -ED-
Sharpe Avatar
August 26, 2008 at 2:43 PM
*is a sprinkling of flattened tadpoles drying in the sun* a common occurrence, unmarked as a child, a sadness at the waste of life as an old man. An evocative poem. Congratulations on your placing.
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August 26, 2008 at 7:23 AM
Congrats on your success in Mark's contest.rgds Brian
Winter Avatar
August 26, 2008 at 5:22 AM
Congratulations Maggie in placing in Mark's contest! Truly excellent and well deserved. Love, Shar
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August 25, 2008 at 4:21 PM
Nice use of imagery to forward your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem place in Mark's contest. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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