Sylvan Landscape

The sylvan landscape stretched for miles
reached across golden fields by stiles.
Leaves carpeted the ground like tiles
whilst branches lay in gathered woodpiles.

Ancient venerable trees lined the aisles 
that wandered willy nilly like juveniles.
Along the river's banks were basking reptiles
with mouths that upturned in happy smiles.

In the midst of the rushing water were isles
that rose up high like big projectiles.
And trees marched up the hills in files
giving shelter to the fox and his wiles.

The peace of the woodlands beguiles
within its tranquillity there are no exiles.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 9, 2023 at 3:23 AM
An excellent example for your current poetry contest... I should give it a go and try to get close to this...
Hamilton Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 4:47 AM
I am sure you can out pass it Silent One your poetry has come on so much over the last few years its a real pleasure to read your current poems hugs Shadow
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 5:22 PM
Thanks for your fine example and the reading, from my town of Hilo, not too far from Pearl Harbor on this Dec 7th day. Aloha, William
Dutta Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 10:34 PM
So ! I will put in separate stanzas
Lillico  Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 1:25 PM
Great example! :)
Duet Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 2:16 PM
Just lovely. So easily read and imagined...like a painting.
Allison Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 10:27 AM
wonderful imagery Shadow I will see if I can come up with a poem for you:-) hugs jan xx
Dutta Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 8:54 AM
So nicely composed on perfect rhyming portraying landscape. Congrats. Trying to follow your example.
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 7:11 PM
Wonderfully done, Shadow. I came to see your example for us in your contest. I am curious if it needs to be on nature though? I suppose that is what you prefer!!
Godwin Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 4:13 PM
Very great imagery achieved through outstanding monorhyme. This was a great ride and I enjoyed the read very much. There are many lines to admire in your poem. All the best ... CayCay
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 2:49 PM
A serenity only nature can provide Shadow. The words you gave us for the contest add to its beauty. This is an awesome example of what you are looking for! Kudos! #7 ; )
Poteet Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 9:56 AM
You've described a very intrinsic setting with a bit of mystery in the beguiling peace of your couplet. Unkept by mankind, the leaves and branches are in natural disarray. The reptiles in the river are at least smiling even if we wonder why. Even the wily fox must rest from his quest sometimes. A challenging example for your contest.
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 7:59 PM
Beautiful write, Shadow.
Leiser Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 6:42 PM
Brilliant! Must try this form :)
Godwin Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 10:59 AM
great job - a truly enjoyable poem born from creative effort. i enjoyed your write very much ... CayCay
Misra Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 11:31 PM
Clever use of both spellings for Sylvan. Piques the interest. Beautiful poem, Shadow. Don't know if I can write anything close to it. ~kc~
Misra Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 2:48 AM
Hey, I see you've changed the spelling to Sylvan from Silvan in the poem's name. I think Silvan was fine - makes one look it up and the vocab count goes up! Luv ~kc~
La France Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 12:26 PM
Shadow, great example for your contest, hopefully I can write something worthy, win or lose, it is the journey that matters ~
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 12:41 PM
wow, one of the best monorhymes I have ever seen. I see congratulations from Charlie. Which contest was this entered in? Anyway, i think I have to fave this one. Super duper.
Hamilton Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 2:58 PM
Not in any contest Andrea ty so much for your very kind comments much appreciated hugs
Smith Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 8:48 PM
Well done with difficult form. Congratulations Shadow...
Hamilton Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 2:56 PM
ty Charlie nice to meet you Hugs
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