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Spring and romance

bird's and bee's

touches and kisses

beneath the tree's

 

 

 

Life and love

flower's and glee

two as one

In sweet jubilee

 

 

 

Forever and endless

passion and steam

candles at midnight

lost in a dream

 

 

 

Diamonds and emeralds 

letter's and plea's

my sweet one and only

I taunt and I tease...

 

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2-18-2013

 

 

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Spring and romance birds and bees touches and kisses beneath the trees Life and love flowers and glee two as one In sweet jubilee Forever and endless passion and steam candles at midnight lost in a dream With diamonds and emeralds letters and pleas my sweet one and only I taunt and I tease... ________

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Date: 3/11/2013 12:18:00 PM
Passionate and romantic....congrats on your sweet win! Hugs
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Date: 3/10/2013 9:19:00 PM
RICK, ~ CONGRATULATIONS in FRANCINE'S lovely "SPRING IS IN THE AIR" contest. have yourself a nice and sweet smile on me...;-) LOL...xox~ PD
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Date: 3/9/2013 4:08:00 PM
Ah Spring, I can't wait and hope it lingers at least a month, and doesn't go straight to I'm so hot I'm going to die LOL. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/9/2013 3:13:00 PM
((())) Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed the rhythm and flow on this one..Sara
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Date: 3/8/2013 6:40:00 PM
congrats on your win Rick
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Date: 3/8/2013 3:39:00 PM
Ohh..this such a beauty from you Rick!Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/8/2013 8:16:00 AM
A different approach form wise and I love it. Congrats. BG
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Date: 3/8/2013 8:11:00 AM
This poem is just a delight to read !! Spring love...ahhhhh !! Enjoyed !! Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 3/8/2013 6:39:00 AM
Congrats :-)
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Date: 3/7/2013 11:58:00 PM
Congratulations Rick. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/7/2013 11:48:00 PM
very nicely done Rick, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 2/19/2013 7:53:00 AM
Rick, I enjoyed reading this beautifully, romantic poem of yours! Great work! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/18/2013 6:46:00 PM
A very nice Spring time write. Thanks for the post.
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