Get Your Premium Membership

Sweet Sound of Laughter

A pond walled in with trees draped with thick moss, Two sisters sit on a stone cross clearing. Brighten by a warm predawn glow across, Swiftly dipping honey round and veering. Two sisters sit on a stone cross clearing; Nesting birds singing in the trees so tall, Swiftly dipping honey round and veering. It's peaceful shadow quiver as leaves fall. Nesting birds singing in the trees so tall, An awe gleamed, on the girls' lovely faces. It's peaceful shadow quiver as leaves fall, On the shallow pond that goldfish graces. An awe gleamed, on the girls' lovely faces, They giggle splashing water with their feet, On the shallow pond that goldfish graces. They unleash fresh sounds in the air so sweet. They giggle splashing water with their feet. Brighten by a warm predawn glow across, They unleash fresh sounds in the air so sweet. A pond walled in with trees draped with thick moss. 5/26/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/3/2022 6:20:00 PM
Wondrous articulation, Eve, that soothingly echoes. Hoping you the best my friend, Aloha~William
Login to Reply
Date: 5/29/2022 10:21:00 AM
Eve I have noticed you are very fond of this form. Naturally you just excel. GREAT ENTRY
Login to Reply
Date: 5/28/2022 4:53:00 PM
Eve, there is such a tranquility to this scene you have painted with words... the still water, the nesting birds singing, the predawn glow, the innocence of childhood. Such comforting imagery; a very lovely pantoum, thank you for sharing. Hugs ~ John
Login to Reply
Date: 5/28/2022 3:42:00 PM
Hello Eve, I like this poem. Good luck in the contest. Hugs.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/27/2022 8:54:00 AM
A very nice Pantoum for the contest. It has alot of imagery. I do have 1 suggestion though, using "sweet" twice in the same line seems a bit redundant. I would get rid of the first "sweet".
Login to Reply
Date: 5/27/2022 4:22:00 AM
Laughter is the best medicine and highly infectious Music for the soul Tom
Login to Reply
Date: 5/27/2022 1:54:00 AM
Perfect pantoum. Laughter is the best medicine.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/26/2022 10:22:00 PM
Excellent entry, Eve. It should do well in the contest. Your imagery and descriptions invited me right into the scene. It was a joyful experience to be there in that place of serenity. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Bill
Login to Reply
Date: 5/26/2022 8:34:00 PM
Beautiful Eve, love this poem.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things