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Sweet Passion

Sweet Passion (This poem can be read from top to bottom and at the same time, side to side.) days of grace with form moments in depth nature in tune with time greet her morning sunrise evenings melt into mornings days of love sweet candy mothering and all a passion of choice embrace her totality sweet sensual passion days of strength years to come rule her life ever there protector of needy lover of peace days of density thick with soul packed with goodness a menu to consume unstoppable power too much to stop days of beauty natural blissful with flowing face of God heart on her sleeve hair of a Goddess days of tomorrows forever tomorrows brightly spoken smiling with lust intense expressed side on inside wanting more © Chuck Keys. All Rights Reserved 2010

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Date: 3/30/2012 8:08:00 PM
It's great to experiment like this with poetry lines. I remember doing something like this once. VERY nice.
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Date: 9/28/2011 8:03:00 PM
I loved it
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Date: 3/31/2011 3:22:00 PM
Extremely creative! A work of art! Many congrat's on your well-deserved HM in the November Poetrysoup competition. Elaine
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Date: 3/31/2011 1:41:00 PM
Chuck, Congratulations on your win in the Soup contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/30/2011 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in PS's Intl. Contest, Chuck! Always a pleasure to read your work! Annalise
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Date: 3/30/2011 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest Chuck. I enjoyed reading your poem again this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2011 7:30:00 PM
Very, very clever. Must have take a long time. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/9/2011 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X3 making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Chuck. I like this one the best. Love Carol
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Date: 12/7/2010 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations Chuck on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2010 10:40:00 AM
Absolutely amazing writing today Chuck. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2010 2:26:00 PM
have enjoyed reading this i have a great regard for this style of poetry chuck.
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Date: 10/31/2010 10:04:00 AM
Quite romantic and passionate write worded so well, Chuck
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Date: 10/31/2010 7:45:00 AM
I agree with our "Sweetheart" wonderful poetry my friend...
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Date: 10/31/2010 7:12:00 AM
Well Chuck the "Sweetheart" is always up for some sweet passion luv.. wonderful lines of romance mingled with touches of passion and emotion too.. enjoyed this Halloween Sunday luv..
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