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Sweet Passion

Sweet Passion    
            	
(This poem can be read from top to bottom and at the same time, side to side.)
					

days of grace                	  with form
moments in depth             	  nature in tune with time
greet her morning sunrise    	  evenings melt into mornings

days of love                 	  sweet candy
mothering and all          	  a passion of choice
embrace her totality         	  sweet sensual passion

days of strength             	  years to come
rule her life                	  ever there
protector of needy           	  lover of peace 

days of density              	  thick with soul
packed with goodness           a menu to consume
unstoppable power            	  too much to stop

days of beauty               	  natural
blissful with flowing        	  face of God
heart on her sleeve          	  hair of a Goddess 

days of tomorrows             	  forever tomorrows
brightly spoken              	  smiling with lust
intense expressed            	  side on inside	     wanting more



© Chuck Keys. All Rights Reserved 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/30/2012 8:08:00 PM
It's great to experiment like this with poetry lines. I remember doing something like this once. VERY nice.
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Date: 9/28/2011 8:03:00 PM
I loved it
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Date: 3/31/2011 3:22:00 PM
Extremely creative! A work of art! Many congrat's on your well-deserved HM in the November Poetrysoup competition. Elaine
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Date: 3/31/2011 1:41:00 PM
Chuck, Congratulations on your win in the Soup contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/30/2011 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in PS's Intl. Contest, Chuck! Always a pleasure to read your work! Annalise
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Date: 3/30/2011 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest Chuck. I enjoyed reading your poem again this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2011 7:30:00 PM
Very, very clever. Must have take a long time. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/9/2011 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X3 making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Chuck. I like this one the best. Love Carol
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Date: 12/7/2010 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations Chuck on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2010 10:40:00 AM
Absolutely amazing writing today Chuck. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2010 2:26:00 PM
have enjoyed reading this i have a great regard for this style of poetry chuck.
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Date: 10/31/2010 10:04:00 AM
Quite romantic and passionate write worded so well, Chuck
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Date: 10/31/2010 7:45:00 AM
I agree with our "Sweetheart" wonderful poetry my friend...
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Date: 10/31/2010 7:12:00 AM
Well Chuck the "Sweetheart" is always up for some sweet passion luv.. wonderful lines of romance mingled with touches of passion and emotion too.. enjoyed this Halloween Sunday luv..
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