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Sweet Mysteries

Divinity lives beyond description Alone, a weary heart cries from its pain Desire eager for its conscription Might truth and love turn this way again? Sweet mysteries, this life, in dreams of thee Yield fantasy's passion I dare to share Walk from this muse, I pray to live in me Conceding this, my love, unto your care On lifeless shadows, cast your glowing light Bring a blessed presence to this peace I seek Rest too this solemn shade, this endless night With angelic verse, but you could only speak For seeking dreams to dream from up above I cast my will and fate to seek your love 09/19/2018 Beautiful Mystery Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton Fourth Place

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Date: 2/9/2019 11:56:00 AM
Hello Charlie Smith, as I read this poem, I found it to be romantic. I know it is a sonnet poem, I read it romantic. Have a nice day my friend.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 2/10/2019 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Darlene...
Date: 1/7/2019 10:09:00 AM
Beautiful Sonnet Charlie...Well written..
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/7/2019 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Joseph...
Date: 11/5/2018 7:22:00 PM
Lovely........ ...Fran
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/8/2018 11:37:00 AM
Thanks Fran...
Date: 10/17/2018 7:57:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Congratulations on your honors.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/18/2018 11:38:00 AM
Thank you Susan...
Date: 10/15/2018 6:43:00 AM
Glad to see your poem climbing to the top of best poem chart, Charlie.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/15/2018 11:38:00 AM
Hadn't even noticed, thanks Vijay...
Date: 10/15/2018 6:02:00 AM
My great friend, I so dearly love reading your poetry and especially your magnificent sonnets! As they exhibit power, beauty, depth, meaningful message and the glow of a true poet's heart.. A fav... a true gem...
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Date: 10/15/2018 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Robert...
Date: 10/10/2018 4:10:00 PM
Shalom and congrats on 4th Place Charlie. FOURTH after Father, Spirit, Son ... your poems are New Testament Epistles to me.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/15/2018 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Anil...
Date: 10/9/2018 3:56:00 AM
A well penned sonnet, Charlie. I love the final couplet. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. T.J
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Date: 10/9/2018 11:26:00 AM
Thank you Teppo...
Date: 10/6/2018 6:17:00 PM
This poem is so beautiful and shares with it divine spirit. : )
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/7/2018 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Connie...
Date: 10/6/2018 9:52:00 AM
Hi Charlie, this is an excellent sonnet my friend. It gives this reader such peace as i read your wonderfully poetic lines. I love the content, the gentleness. This is true poetry my friend. This one has to be a fave. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/7/2018 11:36:00 AM
Thank you Mike...
Date: 10/1/2018 2:36:00 PM
yes, the award goes to this remarkable piece... sweet congrats, charlie..huggs
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Date: 10/1/2018 10:54:00 PM
Thank you Nette...
Date: 10/1/2018 5:46:00 AM
"On lifeless shadows, cast your glowing light"; I like this line; this poem, is ethereal in a number of ways. Beautifully romantic.
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Date: 10/1/2018 1:48:00 PM
Thankyou M.L.
Date: 9/30/2018 3:42:00 PM
The universe created this contest so THIS poem could be born. Your spirituality consciousness shines throughout in tender, loving ways that I relate to easily. A gem, Charlie. I've missed your poems as of late - sometimes Soup time is difficult to find, but I always enjoy your creativity and insights for they bring me light. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/1/2018 1:42:00 PM
You are so kind, thank you CayCay...
Date: 9/30/2018 3:37:00 AM
Excellent. Well and beautifully expressed. Very creative too. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 10/1/2018 1:38:00 PM
My pleasure, thank you Ravi...
Date: 9/30/2018 1:10:00 AM
This is so eloquent Charlie! Kudos and Congratulations!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/1/2018 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Connie...
Date: 9/29/2018 10:36:00 PM
Artistic and creative. Congratulations on your win
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/1/2018 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Michael...
Date: 9/29/2018 3:17:00 AM
You expressed a beautiful sense of longing Charlie, many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/29/2018 11:30:00 AM
Thanks Jan...
Date: 9/28/2018 11:55:00 AM
Beautiful, Charlie. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/29/2018 11:25:00 AM
Thanks Line...
Date: 9/28/2018 2:29:00 AM
"beyond description"! our words sometimes betray us to render the deep and the undefined beauty dwelling inside the heart.. Yet your brilliant Sonnet and your masterful penning didn't fail you to translate the language of the Love you are seeking! Great work Charlie! A pleasure to read. A FAV. My best regards. Be blessed always.
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Date: 9/29/2018 11:20:00 AM
Thank you Besma...
Date: 9/27/2018 1:09:00 PM
This was a beautiful piece, Charlie, brought me hope for the dreams I have, that still remains a mystery of what fate will hold... Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 9/29/2018 11:16:00 AM
Thank you Francesca...
Date: 9/27/2018 8:33:00 AM
There is an aura of mystery verging on the romantic in this beautiful write, Charlie. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/29/2018 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Paul...
Date: 9/27/2018 6:11:00 AM
A wonderful piece, Charlie, I truly enjoyed this gorgeous write! Congrats on your win, my friend - blessings! :-)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/29/2018 11:07:00 AM
Thank you Gregory...
Date: 9/27/2018 12:25:00 AM
A wonderful brilliant poem... hope you found the love you were seeking...
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Date: 9/29/2018 11:01:00 AM
Thank you Pashang...
Date: 9/26/2018 2:55:00 PM
A really beautiful and well-written Sonnet, Charlie, so filled with spiritual romantic longing for lost love. Congratulations on your wonderful placement in the contest. Sandra
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/29/2018 10:54:00 AM
Thank you My Dear...
Date: 9/26/2018 1:47:00 PM
Back to Congrats!!! Charlie...^WW^
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/29/2018 10:54:00 AM
Thanks WW...
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