Notes About The Poem

Sweet Lies

Sweet Lies

I listen to everything you say. 
“I love you.” 
You are important.
Do you know that? 

Did you know that when you looked away?
Did you forget?

Too late to remember, 
so you just let me believe…
I powered on, trying to make “us”,
everything “we” were supposed to be.
I was sick, but still I moved forward.

All the time I serviced you. 
You ate the food I fixed. 
You wore the clothes that I washed. 
I cared for “our” children, 
in ways I thought showed my love, 
to… you.

In my efforts to be all that I painted, 
a picture I could never be…
I learned clearly that I was alone, 
in the gallery,
 of our family album. 

“Pefect-ville” in my heart, 
making candy tarts. 
Connecting the dots for others, 
and praying God would send me…
new colors for my pictures.
The ones I still need to draw. 

All the rest of everything
has turned to black, 
and gray…
while I was dreaming.
Truly,
I had not noticed
until you left.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Sietesantos Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 1:18 PM
This is a deep, powerful piece that resonates with a time and place in my own life so I understand where it is coming from! BRAVO - excellently expressed! Hugs. Pandita
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September 23, 2019 at 2:10 PM
I am pleased and sad. First that you enjoyed it...that is great, second that you are "close to it" as well... my heart sends flowers and nice thoughts. Have the very best day. Ann
Green Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 8:43 AM
Kind of sad but the shades do definitely darken when face with something like this. Keep coloring my friend in the most vivid poetic shades you can find
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September 23, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Thank you my friend. You are so kind. Ann
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