P.S. Awtry Poet Free verse

Sweet Apples

You’re like
sweet apples 
in the summertime

Like breezes 
through grasses
you ease my mind

Come whisper softly
next to me 
You’re everything 
that I need

'Cause I need 
sweet apples 
and breezes 
in the summertime 

And I need 
soft whispers 
next to me 
to ease my mind

Come dream 
beside me 
and be mine

You’ll be 
all I need
all through time

Just whisper 
that you’re mine


1/9/2022
Be Mine Poetry Contest
Sponsor, Regina McIntosh

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Ann Peck April 11, 2023 at 9:05 AM So very sweet and lovely!

Connie Marcum Wong January 19, 2022 at 7:11 AM Very romantic P.S. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo P.S. Awtry January 19, 2022 at 7:22 AM Thank you so much Connie! ~ps

Christuraj Alex January 19, 2022 at 7:04 AM "You’ll be all I need all through time" - Beautiful. Congratulations! P.S. Awtry January 19, 2022 at 7:22 AM Thank you, Christuraj! ~ps

Regina Mcintosh January 19, 2022 at 4:01 AM I really enjoyed this. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina P.S. Awtry January 19, 2022 at 7:21 AM Thank you for sponsoring contests and I am honored to have placed. So glad that you liked my poem :) ~ps

Timothy Mcguire January 17, 2022 at 6:03 PM Very nice P.S. P.S. Awtry January 17, 2022 at 7:45 PM Thank you, Timothy :) ~ps

Paula Goldsmith January 16, 2022 at 12:47 PM A lovely write. Loved the ending. Have a blessed day/week.................... P.S. Awtry January 16, 2022 at 2:40 PM Thank you Paula -ps

Jennifer Proxenos January 14, 2022 at 11:46 PM So cute, a definite win I predict P.S. Thoroughly enjoyed this write, Hugs, blessings, Jennifer. P.S. Awtry January 15, 2022 at 7:10 AM Oh thank you! I enjoyed writing it! :) -ps

Kim Merryman January 14, 2022 at 3:20 PM P.S., this reads like a song. A light and lovely write! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M P.S. Awtry January 14, 2022 at 8:55 PM It came to me as a song. Thank you for your kind words :) -ps

Wren Rushing January 13, 2022 at 6:34 PM P.S. Sounds like your sweet on someone. This is a great poem, just in time for Valentine's! Good luck in Regina's contest! P.S. Awtry January 13, 2022 at 7:09 PM Maybe I'll wrap this up with a bow for the hubs :) Thank you for all your encouragement! ~ps

Connie Marcum Wong January 11, 2022 at 3:14 AM I enjoyed this P.S. I am not sure what she wants. I haven’t been too inspired lately. Guess my mind is on doing my income taxes. Blessings xxoo P.S. Awtry January 11, 2022 at 7:22 AM I am glad you liked it. It came to me as a song…. I thought I’d toss it in that contest and just see how it did. I am sorry you’re not feeling inspired lately—l hate when that happens! Oh and I hate taxes, too :D ~ps

Gershon Wolf January 10, 2022 at 5:43 PM This is extra-special-sweet, P.S. A delight, Gershon P.S. Awtry January 10, 2022 at 7:40 PM Thank you Gershon. I am glad you liked it. :) ~ps

Bill Baker January 10, 2022 at 5:28 PM Sounds like you got this figured out P.S. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Bill P.S. Awtry January 10, 2022 at 7:39 PM thank you Bill :) ~ps

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 10, 2022 at 9:27 AM Warm and pleasantly refreshing, like breezes in the summertime. Lovely writing, P.S. :) P.S. Awtry January 10, 2022 at 9:46 AM Hi Evelyn! Thank you very much! -ps

Supraja Kannan January 10, 2022 at 8:24 AM So lovely, PS... Enjoyed the buyoant tone of your poetry... Loved it... P.S. Awtry January 10, 2022 at 8:42 AM Thank you very much, Supraja :) ~ps

Anais Vionet January 10, 2022 at 7:53 AM I love this, it’s calm and warm - like it’s subjects. P.S. Awtry January 10, 2022 at 7:56 AM Thank you Anais! :)

Harry Horsman January 10, 2022 at 6:36 AM Love how you have shaped this, it is very refreshing and flows like your second stanza. P.S. Awtry January 10, 2022 at 6:39 AM Thank you, Harry! I appreciate you and your encouragement :) -ps

Vijay Pandit January 10, 2022 at 5:27 AM Charming love poem--much enjoyed. P.S. Awtry January 10, 2022 at 6:14 AM Thank you, Vijay :)-ps

Craig Bowden January 10, 2022 at 2:47 AM Sweet write this one. Good luck in your contest. P.S. Awtry January 10, 2022 at 4:08 AM Thank you Craig :)

Deb M January 10, 2022 at 1:43 AM Lovely P.S….I really enjoyed it! Debx P.S. Awtry January 10, 2022 at 4:07 AM Thank you Deb :)

Valsa George January 10, 2022 at 12:00 AM I am sure this is for a contest- Be Mine. If you haven't thought in that line, you can think of it ! Best of luck ! P.S. Awtry January 10, 2022 at 4:07 AM Thank you Valsa. I entered it though I don’t think it’s what she is looking for…but you never know. Maybe she’ll like it :)