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Sweet Apples

You’re like
sweet apples 
in the summertime

Like breezes 
through grasses
you ease my mind

Come whisper softly
next to me 
You’re everything 
that I need

'Cause I need 
sweet apples 
and breezes 
in the summertime 

And I need 
soft whispers 
next to me 
to ease my mind

Come dream 
beside me 
and be mine

You’ll be 
all I need
all through time

Just whisper 
that you’re mine


1/9/2022
Be Mine Poetry Contest
Sponsor, Regina McIntosh

Copyright © P.S. Awtry | Year Posted 2022

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Ann Peck Date: 4/11/2023 9:05:00 AM So very sweet and lovely! Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/19/2022 7:11:00 AM Very romantic P.S. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/19/2022 7:22:00 AM Thank you so much Connie! ~ps

Christuraj Alex Date: 1/19/2022 7:04:00 AM "You’ll be all I need all through time" - Beautiful. Congratulations! Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/19/2022 7:22:00 AM Thank you, Christuraj! ~ps

Regina Mcintosh Date: 1/19/2022 4:01:00 AM I really enjoyed this. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/19/2022 7:21:00 AM Thank you for sponsoring contests and I am honored to have placed. So glad that you liked my poem :) ~ps

Timothy Mcguire Date: 1/17/2022 6:03:00 PM Very nice P.S. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/17/2022 7:45:00 PM Thank you, Timothy :) ~ps

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/16/2022 12:47:00 PM A lovely write. Loved the ending. Have a blessed day/week.................... Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/16/2022 2:40:00 PM Thank you Paula -ps

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 1/14/2022 11:46:00 PM So cute, a definite win I predict P.S. Thoroughly enjoyed this write, Hugs, blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/15/2022 7:10:00 AM Oh thank you! I enjoyed writing it! :) -ps

Kim Merryman Date: 1/14/2022 3:20:00 PM P.S., this reads like a song. A light and lovely write! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/14/2022 8:55:00 PM It came to me as a song. Thank you for your kind words :) -ps

Wren Rushing Date: 1/13/2022 6:34:00 PM P.S. Sounds like your sweet on someone. This is a great poem, just in time for Valentine's! Good luck in Regina's contest! Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/13/2022 7:09:00 PM Maybe I'll wrap this up with a bow for the hubs :) Thank you for all your encouragement! ~ps

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/11/2022 3:14:00 AM I enjoyed this P.S. I am not sure what she wants. I haven’t been too inspired lately. Guess my mind is on doing my income taxes. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/11/2022 7:22:00 AM I am glad you liked it. It came to me as a song…. I thought I’d toss it in that contest and just see how it did. I am sorry you’re not feeling inspired lately—l hate when that happens! Oh and I hate taxes, too :D ~ps

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/10/2022 5:43:00 PM This is extra-special-sweet, P.S. A delight, Gershon Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/10/2022 7:40:00 PM Thank you Gershon. I am glad you liked it. :) ~ps

Bill Baker Date: 1/10/2022 5:28:00 PM Sounds like you got this figured out P.S. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Bill Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/10/2022 7:39:00 PM thank you Bill :) ~ps

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/10/2022 9:27:00 AM Warm and pleasantly refreshing, like breezes in the summertime. Lovely writing, P.S. :) Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/10/2022 9:46:00 AM Hi Evelyn! Thank you very much! -ps

Supraja Kannan Date: 1/10/2022 8:24:00 AM So lovely, PS... Enjoyed the buyoant tone of your poetry... Loved it... Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/10/2022 8:42:00 AM Thank you very much, Supraja :) ~ps

Anais Vionet Date: 1/10/2022 7:53:00 AM I love this, it’s calm and warm - like it’s subjects. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/10/2022 7:56:00 AM Thank you Anais! :)

Harry Horsman Date: 1/10/2022 6:36:00 AM Love how you have shaped this, it is very refreshing and flows like your second stanza. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/10/2022 6:39:00 AM Thank you, Harry! I appreciate you and your encouragement :) -ps

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/10/2022 5:27:00 AM Charming love poem--much enjoyed. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/10/2022 6:14:00 AM Thank you, Vijay :)-ps

Craig Bowden Date: 1/10/2022 2:47:00 AM Sweet write this one. Good luck in your contest. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/10/2022 4:08:00 AM Thank you Craig :)

Deb M Date: 1/10/2022 1:43:00 AM Lovely P.S….I really enjoyed it! Debx Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/10/2022 4:07:00 AM Thank you Deb :)

Valsa George Date: 1/10/2022 12:00:00 AM I am sure this is for a contest- Be Mine. If you haven't thought in that line, you can think of it ! Best of luck ! Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 1/10/2022 4:07:00 AM Thank you Valsa. I entered it though I don’t think it’s what she is looking for…but you never know. Maybe she’ll like it :)