Swarovski Sunset

When the first glimpse 
of silver crescent
sprinkles citrine dust,
sparkling pink brooks 
spring forth, 
flowing through 
emerald green forests.
Moss covered Pine
trees spread their branches, 
reaching towards
the setting amber sun.
Cherry blossom clouds 
coat the dusky horizon,
unfurling lilac lavender
hues amidst the
paper-cut skyline,
and the last beam 
of light starts to 
fade into nocturnal bliss.

The twilight nightingale
can be heard,
comforting us
in the distance.
Lulling us to a 
restful slumber 
under the star 
blanketed stratosphere.

And something
about the way 
warm marshmallow 
threads entwine
with mulberry tints,
reminds me that
every ending 
is a synonym
to new beginnings.

Yet, I tell the 
caviar smeared sunsets
about our 
secret collaborations,
questioning the glowing
gold of Swarovski
rings splattered across
the evening sky,
incensed with
the fragrance of jasmine 
that lingers on 
the summer breeze.

Will blushing 
sangria streaks, 
stretch their feathers,  
paint my blazing
heart of hurt in 
vermilion stars? 

or is this love, 
another passing 
phase, like the waning 
sighs of moonrise?
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Roger  Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 3:57 AM
Dear, this is so beautiful... Congratulations... Happy new year... My best wishes for you...
Agustin Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 11:39 PM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing this. Joyous New year to you and your family. God bless you.
Ashley Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 5:54 PM
Dear Ink Empress, such magical, transformative beauty happens in the glory of a Swarovski sunset across the horizon and in the glorious spill of your intoxicating pen across the poetic page. Beautiful use of color, gemstones and enchanting imagery in this impassioned love story. I especially love your last stanza for a breathtaking finale! Your artistry amazes and delights my imagination. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes, my talented friend, for a happy new year full of poetic inspiration.. ~Susan
One Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 1:13 PM
I remember this excellent poem so well.. Great choice from your page of brilliant poems and congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Miller Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 8:04 AM
Can't stop reading it! Wonderful; congratulations
Anaya Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 3:01 PM
Congratulations on your win, Ink! I can't keep up. A delicately described magical land of magic sunsets, from faraway eyes, verses as vivid as can be. Uniquely prepared words together like a string of pearls..."paper-cut skyline, and the last beam of light starts to fade into nocturnal bliss" questioning love at the end stanzas. Poetry so fine! xoxo Anaya
Empress Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 10:29 PM
Awn beautiful soul you are so kind and generous to leave such an uplifting comment, my poetry is not for everyone, its not everyones cup of tea, but im so happy you enjoy my kind of poems. You see beauty in everything. Truly such a gem.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 8:42 AM
Totally wonderful creation, Dear Ink! I got caught by the Title too...then found such exquisite verses, as yours always are! Love and Hugs ~
Empress Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 10:28 PM
Thank you kind and talented poetess truly grateful for your support
Kendrick Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 12:07 PM
Yes, love or what one thinks is love can be only fleeting and passes swiftly away. Very descriptive and expressive lines penned. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Empress Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 10:27 PM
Thank you so much for your kind support always grateful
Lindley Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 5:13 AM
My friend a truly fine title brought me in to read. Then these verses captured this old poet's heart. You definitely have the magic gift. Such verses are light years beyond normal. Out into the stratosphere, imho. A jewel and a fine fav for my list. God bless you.
Empress Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 10:59 AM
Thank you so much my kind friend for making soup a pleasant place for so many truly grateful
Daisy Silk Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 3:49 PM
Crystals sure do gleam with this beautiful swarovski sunset title, already I'm in love. When I read this I'm transported to this mesmerising terrain, where the auras of the orange and pink dusted skys bleed with “ emerald green forests. Moss covered Pine trees” …yum! I love moss covered anything's! A tropical paradise in the sway of a poet breath, your words, oh Ink how you elicit and evoke such clear pictures of beauty. A gift you effortlessly have “gold of Swarovski rings..” my fav line. Love
Empress Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 12:51 AM
I appreciate you always being so sincere and supportive thank you so much for your kindness and ur poetic presence
Romios Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 11:49 AM
Totally awesome, Ink! I get lost in the beauty of your wonderful imager, Be blessesd. Pangie cc
Empress Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 12:55 AM
Pangie its always so good to hear from you . Thank you for your visit
Volumes Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:12 AM
Simply gorgeous. Every detail of the magnificent sky scene described to perfection as the sun disappears once again. Perfect. Empress its a magnificent poem.
Empress Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 12:57 AM
Thank you always beautiful soul
Jayasankar Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 11:08 PM
Aw... What an outstanding ink dear inky...the title itself is so captivating..."swarovski sunset"...and those 'swarovski rings'..I could imagine myself in a dreamy land admiring the magic of sunset.."paper-cut skyline" how cute..I loved your word choice here.. first three stanzas are my favs, the second and third flowing so well along with the first stanza. Very descriptive work. Hugs... ~ Ani
Empress Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 11:42 PM
Thank you kind poetic soul for your visit and for such a beautiful and supportive comment, im grateful to know that you enjoyed reading this beautiful soul. Keep shining always
George Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 10:36 PM
Wow.... ! I just love it and am lost in the beauty of the ethereal sunset you have described. Love the title too.The great images and the changing facets of the sky with 'the amber sun setting amid cherry blossom clouds' are breathtaking.This goes into my FAVE.
Empress Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 11:41 PM
So kind of you to say that, I appreciate your generous and thoughtful comment, and so grateful for the fave too, your feedback is soul warming really, thank you so much for seeing beauty in everything
Wolf Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:27 PM
Thank you for introducing me to 'Swarovski,' Empress. How uncultured I must be never to heard the word before! -- F.F. (Former Farmer)
Empress Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:26 PM
Hi f.f , did you find out now what swarovski means? Sometimes, as a reader I come across words or things i dont know too, but when i read the whole sentence, i can decipher what something means. “ swarovski” is a famous brand for jewelry as in gems And not everyones interested in jewelry. You are not uncultured at all, Thank you for your visit.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:08 PM
We have a resort near our home called Sparkling Hill. It’s owned by Swarovski. They should print and frame this piece.
Empress Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:45 PM
Ah that sounds like a lavish place to be. I doubt this poem they would consider hah. Thank you Richard for reading and for your visit
Baker Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 5:28 PM
Your Free Verse flows so smoothly and gives us such vivid imagery, it is a pleasure to read each verse. I especially liked your closing verse in this one, Ink. "or is this love, another passing phase, like the waning sighs of moonrise?" It is true, we can only know Love in the moment; everything else is projection, and vulnerable to misgivings. Thanks for sharing your unique thoughts with us through your poetry, my friend. Bill
Empress Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:48 PM
Thank you Bill for reading thoroughly, and for feeling the depth of those lines. As a sunset chaser i find myself engrossed in many various shades of thoughts as sun leaves us in awe: appreciate your support always
Silence Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 5:06 PM
Ahhh..your poems, I really have not enough words to express how it touches me and resonates so deeply, my beautiful soul sis! I honestly love this whole piece and every word uttered is such a masterpiece! The depth that flows and the ebbing of emotions, keeps me at edge! Gripping onto each word, speaks to me so profoundly, ahh..and the emotions here are so raw and vulnerable..piercing us within, but you are right, every ending is a new beginning, to grow stronger, and wiser—moving forward.
Silence Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 5:30 PM
Always my beautiful soul sis! You are one of my absolutely favorite poets and I’m truly honored to read and feel your words, so deep, beautifully breathtaking, hauntingly exquisite..I’m the one to thank you!
Empress Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:47 PM
You are too sweet and always see beauty in everything my beautiful soul sis. Im so glad u liked the poem: thank u for being here n for ur support. Always appreciate you
Hind Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Such beautiful poetry you're so capable of. Wow, dear friend... <3
Empress Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:49 PM
Thank you kind soul always
Rose  Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 10:42 AM
I think you were born to write poetry, and I have no doubt of this for your poem is the most splendid thing I ever did read. Thank you for sharing your heart, your pen and your beautiful mind, with me dear Empress. :)
Empress Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:50 PM
Oh rose, you are as sweet as your name, what a massive compliment. Im truly touched and so grateful for such kindness. Thank you so much
Poet Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:23 AM
Dear Ink, this is truly exceptional and will leave a lasting impression. The abundance of alliterations and metaphors in this poem sets it apart on a grander scale that many of us could only dream of reaching. I am deeply grateful for the opportunity to delve into the world you have created through your words. Your ability to bring the setting sun to life with your magical words is awe-inspiring. You possess the talent to craft your words like a skilled artist painting a vivid picture on canvas.
Empress Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:50 PM
Dear Sotto, thank you for your generous and kind support truly, i am forever grateful for your poetic presence, always lifting others up, means alot
Shines Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 8:42 AM
"every ending is a synonym to new beginnings" loved this line and beautifully penned poem.have a great day and keep smiling:)
Empress Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:51 PM
Thank you so much for your visit and for reading, truly grateful
Mcintosh Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 4:46 AM
gentle glow of light, love, lasting joy, forever on the horizon of a moment when the wonderful of life becomes a sense of the promise, the imagery is breathtaking, the stanzas like stardust - detailed lines of your muse, so beautiful, so very beautiful. love it. God bless you, much love, Gina
Empress Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:42 AM
Your comments are better than my poems so poetic you are beautiful kind Gina, thank you so much. May God bless you always too
Gentile Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 4:41 AM
I can't say it better that what has already been said below about your enchanting imagery which flows like a summer breeze! A lovely poem to read this morning Ink Empress!!
Empress Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:42 AM
Thank you so much Mike, this is so nice of you, appreciate your visit and feedback
Pandit Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 4:39 AM
Cherry blossom clouds coat the dusky horizon, unfurling lilac lavender hues amidst the paper-cut skyline, and the last beam of light starts to fade into nocturnal bliss--So beautifully conveyed, Ink--you brought forth the setting sun for the reader in magical words. And I really liked the turn in the ending--or is this love, another passing phase, like the waning sighs of moonrise? You paint your canvas like an artist!
Empress Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:41 AM
Wow vijay you really felt my poem thank you so much for reading and leaving such an insightful and supportive comment, i am truly honoured and grateful
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