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“Look at the rain long enough with no thoughts in your head, and you gradually feel your body falling loose, shaking free of the world of reality. Rain has the power to hypnotize.” by Haruki Murakami
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ From the heavens, I descend, on the parched earth, my grace I spread; A gift from the skies, I’m rain, divine, bestowing life and a love uniquely mine. I quench the thirst of the land below, nurturing seedlings, helping them grow; As I caress the leaves of the trees, I offer them solace, a moment’s ease. I’m the sustainer of life, you see, a friend to the rivers, the lakes, the sea; To the oceans, I return, as vapor I rise, a cycle of life, a bond that never dies.

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Date: 4/8/2024 5:00:00 PM
Sara, what a perfect picture of rain as "sustainer of life." Your poem shows the tenderness of rain's selfless gift in a constant cycle of renewal and resurrection. Your poems always have a wonderful underlying meaning! Congratulations on your win! Easter blessings to you!
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Date: 4/7/2024 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful personification write. I love the picture.... Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/7/2024 6:27:00 PM
awww, thank you, sweet Paula! I appreciate your congratulatory words and visit. Have a great evening, Sara
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/7/2024 6:26:00 PM
awww, thank you, sweet Paula! I appreciate your congratulatory words and visit. Have a great evening, Sara
Date: 4/6/2024 7:41:00 PM
Hearty Congratulations Sara on your well deserved first place.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/7/2024 6:27:00 PM
aww, thank you Valsa. I appreciate your congratulatory words and visit. Hope you are well...enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 4/5/2024 4:28:00 PM
Sara, wonderfully penned and creative, congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 3/23/2024 3:20:00 PM
From the heavens I descend…spreading grace and nurturing…sustaining the lives of the rivers, lakes and seas…a fine personification!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/23/2024 3:41:00 PM
ahh, thanks, Kim, for your enthusiastic response and comments. Have a blessed evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/23/2024 8:36:00 AM
Excellent personification which celebrates the beauty and significance of rain as a symbol of renewal, growth, and interconnectedness. Through its evocative imagery and profound message, the poem invites readers to appreciate the profound impact of this elemental force on the cycle of life and the beauty of the natural world.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/23/2024 3:40:00 PM
thanks for your in depth comments, Silent One. Your insights are spot on. Funny, I actually felt 'powerful' writing this poem. Never had that feeling before when writing poetry. Maybe I'm just a tad weird today :-) enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 3/23/2024 7:17:00 AM
A fabulous personification, Sara. --A gift from the skies, I’m rain, divine--To the oceans, I return, as vapor I rise, a cycle of life, a bond that never dies--yes, indeed! A FAVE for me, Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/23/2024 3:40:00 PM
thank you for your enthusiasm for my poem, Vijay. I'm humbly grateful for your fave....that means a great deal to me. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 3/23/2024 5:40:00 AM
Very nice poem. Well written Sara. I enjoyed this :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/23/2024 3:38:00 PM
awww, thank you Heidi! I appreciate your visit and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/22/2024 10:33:00 PM
Wow.... so beautiful dear Sara. You have written all about the transformative and regenerative effect of the shower from the heavens with such beautiful rhyming. Love this. Into my FAVE.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/23/2024 3:39:00 AM
thanks for visiting and for your beautiful comments. Glad you enjoyed my poem. Humbly grateful for the fave... Have a wonderful Saturday, Sara
Date: 3/22/2024 6:32:00 PM
Sara this is brilliant, we so need the refreshing rain, love how your words flow so rhythmically, the picture and the quote complement your poem perfectly… Beryl
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/23/2024 3:40:00 AM
thank you, Beryl. I'm grateful for your visit and for your complimentary words about my poem's rhythm as well as the quote and picture. Thanks for noticing the detail, hugs, Sara

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