Survivors

When hope no longer sustains us
and all that's left is debris
scattered across the landscape of our heart
When terrible winds of angry storms
cloak blue skies in a frightening rush of darkness
and nothing is left to the eyes but a scar of despair
etched in the stunned silence of our tired faces
as we search for yesterday's sun
among dawn's gleaming light
trapped between the cycle of black ominous clouds
from our emotional hurricane of constant howling screams
that broke the bonds of love away from its moors
and brought finality to fingers parting
while still clinging until the last through the storm
as it stoled our memories of when we were warm together
leaving us alone and exhausted


10/22/20 contest After the Hurricane
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Agustin Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 12:35 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your poetic talent with this muse, making me vicariously feel "emotional hurricane of constant howling screams" yet letting me trust the Prince of Peace, our Lord and Saviour Jesus Christ to calm me from such. God bless you.
Hankins Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 9:40 AM
Congratulations! I loved the emotion this poem evoked. Very deserving!
Kauffman Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 8:51 AM
Congratulations on your win, Frederic! Amazing image after image flows through each line that reaches a profound depth of emotion. All the best to you.
Roper Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 9:37 PM
Frederic, great imagery with deep emotion. Congratulations on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 9:21 PM
Well done, Frederick! Congratulations on your silver win!
Sands Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 12:28 PM
Very well written Frederic :)
Wanter Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 8:22 AM
Very warm. Love it. Fav.
Hamilton Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 7:02 PM
A powerful write Frederic, no best wishes needed this is a winner!
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