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Surrendered Love Love Me Like You Mean It

Fragrant magick candlelight flickers hot, blue, red flame stimulating sparks bind hands. Tame harmony remains. "Love." While love awakes a wanderer of my emboldened heart; gentle wind meander blows, and gusts oppose. I discern your quintessence in the breeze emerging out of dust of dry humble ground from I was formed ... a fleeting glance into colorfulness night; for our love rhymes of aged mirth; our unconditional surrendered love eclipse with flickering light while honey sips our lips. Bound by love and devotion my soul embraces you …you cradle me close a thirst to be near for all eternity. A dwelling among this vessel knowing that you are in me and I in you bathing in the afterglow of sunset under heavens studded with bright stars. 11/29/2019
Poetry Contest: Love Me Like You Mean It Sponsored by: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver magick NOUN archaic spelling of magic.

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Date: 1/20/2020 10:48:00 PM
Congrats Eve to win on your wonderful poem. I am always admirer of you.both as as artist ans as a poet.
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Date: 1/20/2020 3:50:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Eve :)
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Date: 1/20/2020 1:56:00 PM
Congrats on your win for this beautiful, romantic write, Eve. Hugs, John
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Date: 1/20/2020 12:47:00 PM
back to offer a double congratulation on this beautiful write...i see you took another fine win with this one... congrats again... hugs
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Date: 1/7/2020 10:16:00 PM
Blessings and congrats on your win in John's contest, Eve - keep on writing, my friend, and thank you for sharing. Blessings! :o) <3
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Date: 1/6/2020 9:53:00 AM
Congrats Eve, very nicely done!
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Date: 1/5/2020 10:53:00 PM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your win with this marvelous write. Love "a fleeting glance into colorless night." What wonderful imagery.
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Date: 1/5/2020 6:29:00 PM
Congratulations Eve. I love the line "bathing in the afterglow of sunset". I will remember those words next time I enjoy a sunset. ~ John
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Date: 1/5/2020 5:47:00 PM
beautiful write Eve... congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Date: 1/5/2020 5:17:00 PM
Back again with congrats on your first place win, Eve.
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Date: 1/5/2020 1:44:00 PM
Eve back again to congratulate you on your win!;)
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Date: 1/5/2020 1:42:00 PM
What a beautiful poem Eve, congrats on a top win in my best of 2019 contest!
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Date: 1/5/2020 5:21:00 PM
I forgot to mention you used one of my fave words afterglow!
Date: 1/4/2020 8:09:00 PM
Fabulous poem, Eve!:-) Congrats on your top win!
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Date: 1/4/2020 7:27:00 PM
Eve a beautiful romantic poem! Congratulations on your top win my friend!:)
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Date: 12/1/2019 10:44:00 PM
Eve I love this poem,so romantic reminds me of some recent paintings!!!!
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Date: 11/30/2019 11:23:00 AM
So beautifully poetic, Eve. Eternal love and devotion. A bond ,never to be broken. Such a beautiful love.
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Date: 11/30/2019 8:14:00 AM
Beautiful verses in splendor of romance--Excellent write, Eve.
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Date: 11/30/2019 6:22:00 AM
A love that will remain ever etched into your heart.
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Date: 11/30/2019 6:09:00 AM
I enjoyed your words much love to you
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Date: 11/30/2019 2:26:00 AM
" fleeting glance into colorfulness night; for our love rhymes of aged mirth; " you have such a lovely, romantical way with words, Eve!
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Date: 11/30/2019 1:38:00 AM
Eve, I love this poem. It is beautifully written! :)
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Date: 11/30/2019 12:56:00 AM
Hi Eve this is a poetic touch. Thanks for sharing your version of what loves means to you. Best of luck in the contest and thanks for sharing
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