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The Bull Snake crawled into my shed used an old Sparrow nest for his bed through the door then came I and we met eye to eye, I must not repeat what I said!

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Date: 2/28/2011 8:40:00 AM
Wayne u should enter this one in John Freeman's Slapstick Limerick contest.. it is so fun ...good luck ..my friend if u do..luv..
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Date: 2/23/2011 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Limerick II". A well deserved win Wayne. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2011 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Wayne
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Date: 2/8/2011 1:09:00 AM
lol!!!! Very scary and very funny., Wayne. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/7/2011 9:29:00 PM
I really like yours, Wayne. Congratulations on your win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/7/2011 8:10:00 PM
Congrats Wayne on your winning poem in Debbie's contest with this creative write my friend.. enjoy sweet success with luv..
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Date: 2/7/2011 7:34:00 PM
No, really...c'mon...repeat what you said...I wanna hear it! LOL! Fun limerick. Congrats on your WIN in deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/7/2011 6:50:00 PM
yep that will scare bad words out of a person sometimes! congratulations on yhour win, Wayne!
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Date: 2/7/2011 6:00:00 PM
No, better not, but who could blame you? congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/7/2011 5:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest.
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Date: 2/7/2011 5:21:00 PM
Thanks for commenting on my poem and this limerick is very witty, well done~~
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Date: 2/3/2011 9:30:00 PM
hahaha, GREAT limericking!!!
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Date: 2/3/2011 7:29:00 PM
How many people are ophidophobic? You have written this limerick very well. Did you get a mongoose after the snake?
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Date: 2/3/2011 6:45:00 PM
At least not on Soup Wayne..very funny and I think I would be frozen if I ran into a bull snake.. sounds huge.. enjoyed your fun Limerick my friend..so happy to see u back again.. appreciate your wonderful and sweet comments with luv..
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Date: 2/3/2011 4:44:00 PM
Very creative and funnhy haiku with good images, Wayne
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Date: 2/3/2011 2:09:00 PM
Great rhythm, flow, and rhyme..Enjoyed the reading and the chuckle..Your presence at my work was like a ray of sunshine on this cold, cloudy, rainy day..Sara
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