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Sunshine and Shadows Life, a story of sunshine and shadows tears and tidings joy moments so rare of priceless value surged into being with the ringing of a bell or the sounding of a word a terminal saga of gladness and sadness, the noiseless laugh, never to be heard. Like a day of inconsistent sun and drizzle, smoke bosoms from black tar the moist seasoning of a blessing drying up leaving mostly parched ground on which to watch the coming of a mixed fate fade in and out of light that doesn’t last. Turning and twisting in the turgid waters we move, agile, between antithesis frown and favor glory and shame. With infant fallibility, we conquer the current to an impartial shore ever grateful for the restful hours to playfully balance between sunshine and shadows. 2/18/18 Best Free Verse 2018 Sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 3/4/2018 8:33:00 PM
Congratulations Sian for your wonderful win with your beautiful poem elegantly depicting the yin and yang of life. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Janis Thompson
Date: 3/4/2018 9:28:00 PM
Thanks Susan. I feel that was a good description.
Date: 2/27/2018 9:51:00 AM
Congrats Janice on a fine placement in my contest!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 3/4/2018 9:29:00 PM
Thanks, John.
Date: 2/23/2018 10:35:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Janis.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 3/4/2018 9:29:00 PM
Thanks Line. Blessings.
Date: 2/18/2018 8:25:00 PM
A most pleasant read, Janis.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 2/20/2018 11:08:00 PM
Thanks

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