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Written on February 8, 2024

First Draft - working on the poem

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Screaming into the spirit, In whispers, sentimental, Risking all the dreams, the hopeful Grace in gentle colors, hues of light Softly echoing across the summer skies. Erasing the moon and stars, Laughing like she might fall, Beneath the floods of dewlike kisses, Faded into the breathless petals, Roses and shadows, Hearts so mellow. Alive, she glows and shows – singing of what she knows. Love bursts from its hope, mysterious, Yet, she knows – there is glory in her flames.

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Date: 2/8/2024 3:05:00 PM
Beautiful poetry as is my friend. Not much left to accomplish in this one. :-) Write On! Bill
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Date: 2/8/2024 2:10:00 PM
With your imagery, you captured the joy sunshine brings....'grace in gentle colors...singing of what she knows.' Your poem flowed as beautifully as the sun beams you described. Have a great day, Sara
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Date: 2/8/2024 12:33:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write/pretty picture. Have a wonderful day.................................
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