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Poetry/Verse/Sunset State Of Mind
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1577-659-10
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written September 10, 2023
For the International Contest, Sunsets
sponsor, Natasha L Scragg, Judged 09/25/2023

First Place

Sunset Out My Window Painting by Marcy Urban - Pixels

"When your world is moving too fast and you are lost in the chaos; end your day with watching a beautiful, tranquil sunset."

                                       Quote by - Constance

 

I am watching the sky, changing, mingling, liquid gold of the sun fading, soon, the magical sky will touch the earth, the hues of purple and pink blending, in minutes this perfect sunset, will slip away ... ablaze with exquisite drama. From my window I gaze, beyond my bare autumn tree, at the tinges of light blue and streaks of scarlet, the puffs of mauve, and yellow, the clouds are low, wispy and dreamy, it is so serene, calm, quiet and peaceful, oh, what an unforgettable sundown this evening. The colors are breathtaking, opulent in beauty, stunning, and unforgettable, the effect is very romantic, I love the occasional wisps of orange, and then, I watch as the sun falls into the horizon, for a bit the sky is pulling the colors, like she does not want to let them go yet.

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Date: 9/27/2023 7:47:00 AM
Wonderfull poetry; congratulations
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Constance La France
Date: 9/27/2023 12:42:00 PM
Terry, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations.
Date: 9/26/2023 5:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Dear Constance. Admired the beautiful imageries of sunset in your stunning poem. Love and Hugs ~
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Date: 9/27/2023 12:43:00 PM
Mala, thank you so much for the congratulations, comment, and compliment, love and hugs .
Date: 9/26/2023 2:31:00 PM
Wonderful write Constance, Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/27/2023 12:43:00 PM
Joseph, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats.
Date: 9/11/2023 4:14:00 PM
Thank you for hosting contests! I enjoyed reading your sunset poem!
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Date: 9/12/2023 9:37:00 AM
Karen, thank you for the comment and compliment.
Date: 9/11/2023 3:50:00 PM
Constance this is one of my favorites of the sunset contest entries that I've seen . You used incredible imagery. Thanks for my recent wins in your fun contests and I hope to chat with you sometime. Leaving for that 50th reunion on Thursday.
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Date: 9/12/2023 9:38:00 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, you are welcome on your wins an look forward to talking with you soon.
Date: 9/11/2023 3:14:00 PM
The sky is always our friend. We can be sure it will be there for us. Ever smiling ever touching, ever warming with it's touch
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Date: 9/12/2023 9:39:00 AM
Situation, thank you so much for the nice comment.
Date: 9/11/2023 6:07:00 AM
“Liquid gold of the sun fading” one amongst the many lines that made my soul warm and heart full, as a sunset lover i cant help but be in awe of the colors used her and the way you’ve painted imagery is so stunning. Love this
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Constance La France
Date: 9/11/2023 3:11:00 PM
Ink, thank you so much for the lovely comment and compliment.
Date: 9/10/2023 9:13:00 PM
"the clouds are low, wispy and dreamy, it is so serene, calm, quiet and peaceful, oh, what an unforgettable sundown the evening." Simply lovely ! Watching a beautiful sunset gives immeasurable joy and indescribable peace of mind to even a heart worn by worldly tribulations. So beautifully penned dear Constance.
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Date: 9/11/2023 12:35:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the lovely comment and compliment.

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