Sunset Pleiades

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Sunset Subtle hues of sunlight seen in the western sky. Shades of orange and red, salmon pink and yellow; swirl on the horizon. Sun sinks gradually setting the sky on fire. 11~20~15 Contest Pleiades Please Sponsor Kim Merryman

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Date: 5/12/2021 3:31:00 PM
What a stunning moment in time! You captured it so magnificently Sam. Congratulations!! This is a fave for me!
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Date: 11/30/2015 5:29:00 PM
A 7-plus! This is lovely. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 12/1/2015 1:14:00 AM
Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/30/2015 3:16:00 AM
Congrats Jan.. wonderful write n win!
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Date: 11/30/2015 11:01:00 AM
Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/29/2015 8:26:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Jan. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/29/2015 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Sandra:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/29/2015 7:27:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful win. excelleet composition Anisha D
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Date: 11/29/2015 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/28/2015 6:32:00 PM
Jan, congrats on your awesome win:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/28/2015 6:36:00 PM
Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/28/2015 3:25:00 PM
Jan, Congrats on your fine win, SKAT LOVE
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Date: 11/28/2015 3:27:00 PM
Thanks SKAT:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/28/2015 7:17:00 AM
Nicely done, Jan. Great imagery, and I love the bottom painting..it fits your Pleiades perfectly. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/28/2015 9:21:00 AM
:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/28/2015 7:16:00 AM
Nicely done, Jan. Great imagery...love the bottom painting..it fits your Pleiades perfectly. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/28/2015 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/28/2015 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations Jan
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Date: 11/28/2015 5:20:00 AM
Thanks Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/27/2015 11:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Jan ! Eve
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Date: 11/28/2015 4:47:00 AM
Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/27/2015 11:11:00 PM
Very lovely jan congrats on your win very deserved.
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Date: 11/28/2015 4:47:00 AM
Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/27/2015 7:56:00 PM
this is a really lovely evocation of sunset, jan, very colourful! you know what i've said about you and these short forms...congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/28/2015 4:47:00 AM
Thanks Charlotte you are so kind to me and fill me with such confidence to carry on with my writing:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/27/2015 6:19:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on this beauty being high on the winner's list. Very deserving Jan!
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Date: 11/27/2015 6:20:00 PM
Thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/27/2015 3:24:00 PM
Jan, beautiful imagery and smooth flow to your lines! Congrats on your win and for learning a new poetry form! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/27/2015 3:26:00 PM
Oh thank you so much Kim:-) :-) I love learning new forms and this was a lovely contest to write for:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/22/2015 8:42:00 PM
Hello Jan... you paint a colourful picture with words. Good luck - Lindsay
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Date: 11/23/2015 1:12:00 AM
Thanks Lindsay:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/22/2015 6:49:00 PM
A superb entry in the contest my friend! As always your poetic talent shines bright! A7
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Date: 11/23/2015 1:11:00 AM
Thanks Robert:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/22/2015 5:56:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Jan, with such a wonderful flow and rhythm. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/22/2015 5:58:00 PM
Thanks Sandra - I missed entering the sunset haiku contest - I have ones I could have posted but didn't so i thought I would use this contest to do a sunset poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/21/2015 11:50:00 AM
Beautiful imagery my lovely friend. 7 for this nice pictured poem. Loved always,bl
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Date: 11/21/2015 12:03:00 PM
Thanks BL:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/20/2015 7:02:00 PM
You did a beautiful job,Jan!! Sunsets are on our minds over here!! I am seeing others put the title right above their poem as you did here. Is that a rule with the form or something? I need to go check that out!
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:01:00 AM
You start off with one word and the poem is about that word and the rest of the lines are 6 syllables:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/20/2015 7:00:00 PM
thanks on my memories poem, Jan. I used real characters as if it were actually me. It was a BEAR trying to make it center over here at Soup. Good grief. Let me read this new poem of yours now.
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Date: 11/21/2015 3:00:00 AM
Loved the way you formatted that poem - so touching a write too:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/20/2015 3:19:00 PM
Ssssssso lovely, Jan! You tackled this pleiadas form with ease. I love it:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/20/2015 3:22:00 PM
Thanks Paul I am having a brilliant day! :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/20/2015 3:07:00 PM
just the blaze of its glory....is worthy of your story....which Beautifully described the scene....where so many hearts have found their dream....;)
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Date: 11/20/2015 3:09:00 PM
Thanks Eric:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/20/2015 1:46:00 PM
Great imagery Jan
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Date: 11/20/2015 1:50:00 PM
Thanks Tim:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/20/2015 1:04:00 PM
There is beautiful imagery in this gentle piece Jan. A lovely entry Kim is sure to enjoy.
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2015 1:16:00 PM
Thanks Connie:-) hugs jan xx
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