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the dying woman gasped at the magnificence of her last sunset

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/9/2011 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Rick Parise's "Nature Monoku" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:23:00 PM
I'm glad to see this on the winners' list, Jack. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/5/2011 6:56:00 PM
I like it
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Date: 6/5/2011 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 6/4/2011 8:01:00 AM
Excellent!Many congrats jack...
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Date: 6/3/2011 8:34:00 PM
Congrats Jack on your super win with this creative entry for Rick.. well done my friend..luv.
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Date: 6/3/2011 12:55:00 PM
I wish MY hospital had a courtyard as beautiful as the one in the contest picture. lol. Gorgeous, empowering one to ' take in ' all there is to behold on this brief journey. Gwendolen
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Date: 6/3/2011 12:28:00 PM
A fine piece of monoku..spellbinding!!Good luck to you if it is for the contest..gautami
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Date: 6/2/2011 10:12:00 PM
Very interesting and different way to do the contest, jack!! coolio.
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:35:00 PM
MONOKU of yours is really wonderful....seeing the last sunset of her life,,,,tha last chance to see the beauty of life..... ***jun-jun
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Date: 6/2/2011 4:41:00 PM
A beauty Jack...I think we all hope to leave with the magnificence of this world befor our eyes...BG
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Date: 6/2/2011 3:12:00 PM
Enjoyed this one..Very impressive..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 6/2/2011 2:10:00 PM
What a wonderful way to express goodbye the world, jack
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Date: 6/2/2011 1:08:00 PM
Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Jack. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:32:00 PM
The play on words...well, quite frankly it states it all..nice one, enjoyed.
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